August Angels : Day 3 Lily of the night takes flight
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August Angels : Day 3 Lily of the night takes flight
Co-written by: Williamsji & Nardine
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SYNOPSIS: Effective from August, this year, myself Williamsji Maveli and Honorable Poetess Nardine Sanderson has come up with an idea of collaborate (co-writing) writing of verses in a mutual interest and good intention with a title " AUGUST ANGLES " at our wonderful site COSMO,We will be writing and posting as many poems as possible focusing on love, peace and harmony in life. Hope all will support our effort at this juncture, we love poetry and we live in poetry.. We look forward to hearing from you on our joint-venture in Poetry Writing _ WILLIAMSJI & NARDINE
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- Poet Williamsji Maveli writes:
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Your cute daughter is angelic, Lily
She was born as a good catholic,
Her face is so elegant, she is very sweet,
She smiles, when you all come to greet,
She brightens up your days when you meet,
She is pretty, alluring, so soft and pure.
So willful and sometimes she is demure.
Every person sees her light within her soul;
she brings you to do a very special role.
She sings, looking at everyone she knows,
Heavenly glory in her shines as your angel grows.
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Poetess Nardine Sanderson writes:
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A flowering lily within a pure hearts rose,
Sprouting innocence where ever she go's,
Like a delight loving flower she grows,
Enlightening the minds of others that shows,
To some religions her ghostly spirit of the night,
To other religions a flower take's flight,
Her soul of pure essence in hand upon greeting understand,
She blooms within the mid august months,
In the warmth of the sunshine's raise,
This precious little girl within eyes of praise,
A face so delightful to all hearts in gaze,
I love you my child of innocence in so many ways.
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- Co-written
- BY
- WILLIAMSJI MAVELI & NARDINE SANDERSON
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Dearest friend sir Williamsji, this was an interesting write to collaborate, having learnt so much about the name lily, all the different religious beliefs behind the name and meaning lily, the imagery combined by both our minds paints a beautiful picture of this child, was heaps of fun, working with you again, hope others take the time to read and enjoy it, much love and respect to you sir, nardine Sanderson xoxo
Dearest Poetess Nardine Sanderson,
One of the great misconceptions about poetry is that to read and to feel the lines of a verse, and take up writing in a very solitary act. Poetry is really a way of sharing feelings and ideas.
Because poems are about experience we all face in our day to day life as a single person When you're going through something, whether it's a wonderful thing like having a child or a sad thing like losing somebody, you often feel like, But co-writing poems gives a wonderful experience as such, It is a sharing of two thoughts, ideas and experience into one verse. My second daughter, Madonna Williams, She used to help me with all my titles—and now I added Poetess Nardine Sanderson into my writing world. We welcome viewers comments on Co-writing through this comments columns
Love to you dear Nardine for your co-operation and understanding
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hey you TWO, this is so cool.......I didn't know you were doing a collaboration this month.......I'm so excited for you both and looking forward to what the month brings us...........you did a stellar job of conveying some new information (for me at least, didn't know they bloomed in august) and the way you use the flower and your daughter to create such lovely imagery..........when you look it the way you've focused your writes............the combination makes for a Great read..........love this you guys.........much fun...........APPLAUSE...........big smiles.........tony xx
Dear Brother Tony Taylor,
We have to bring new styles of writing with mulch-cultured views and thoughts, I love to do collaborations in writing poems. This is to increase and to improve love, harmony and peace among writers from different parts of the world, The world is one, and we all are one, one family, brothers and sisters, Love & Hugs to you my dear brother Tony Taylor.
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
This is absolutely fantastic. The poet and poetess exhibit poetic wings. Well done.
Dear Glenn,
It is so nice to fly together along with the wings of the other soul birds, Love & Hugs Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
This is fantastic Sweetie and William.Keep up the Good work.
Dear Poetess Piusha Singh,
All these will make combined writings beautiful and lovely.
We both had determined to co-write during month August (August Angels - The TITLE credit goes to Poetess Nardine Sanderson). I always wish and urge for experiments in life which surely bring positive results, Thanks for your appreciation and comments.
Love, regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI