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Aurora Borealis

Aurora Borealis

O' Aurora borealis northern Light's 
Sweet rare flower of heaven.

Strike your visions o'er havens starlit door

As you spin your swirling rope's aflame.

Dazzle unique, striking beauty as you dance,
Sprinkle hue's colors, on silver, tipped feet.

Rapturous beauty, resplendent fire 
Come blaze our eyes.

 
Entrancing, dramatic wonder
O' Aurora, child of light you mesmerize.
 
Blushing lights beyond brilliance
Words fail to describe such magnificence.
 ..................

Olivia J. Wright     

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Dean Kuch

It's on my bucket list to one day see the Northern Lights, Olivia.
Your captivating poem and eloquent wording helped to take me there, if only briefly.
For that I am truly grateful.
Nice work!
~Dean Kuch

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Olivia J. Wright

Hi Dean Thank You for reading me- and for your complementary comments.
When you finally get to see 'Aurora' you won't be disappointed that's for sure,
For it's quite spectacular ... And an Awesome  (heavenly show)
Regards  Olivia✍

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Dean Kuch

I'm sure they are, Olivia and you're very welcome.
~Dean  :)

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Tony Taylor

Hello OLIVIA!!... as I read your final line I couldn't help thinking, although it may very well be true, your words surely brought a magnificence to the minds eye of the reader..., and THAT is what we poets aim to accomplish, for the most part!!....I liked the way you formatted this.... it added to the overall flow and helped the imagery to have more of an impact because of the way you broke your lines!!!......ALL STARS!!... well done...... and....... WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo 👍👍👍✳✳

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Olivia J. Wright

Hi Tony Thankyou for reading me and leaving a lovely review -
much appreciated bro ✍️

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Olivia J. Wright

Thankyou - dear poet for reading me very much appreciated  - ✍️

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Neil Anthony

I have seen the auroa borealis and you're quite right describing them as mesmerizing. Thanks for painting emotions with words.

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Olivia J. Wright

Thank-you for reading me Neil - l loved writing this particular poem -
And l hope l did the surreal
light show the ....justice it deserves 
Regards - Olivia~

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Wayne Stubbs

Excellent! Well written, congrats on your nomination... 👏👏👏😊

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Olivia J. Wright

Thank you Wayne - for your positive comments  much appreciated’
dear poet..  ✍️ 

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