Poem -
Aurora Borealis
O' Aurora borealis northern Light's
Sweet rare flower of heaven.
Strike your visions o'er havens starlit door
As you spin your swirling rope's aflame.
Dazzle unique, striking beauty as you dance,
Sprinkle hue's colors, on silver, tipped feet.
Rapturous beauty, resplendent fire
Come blaze our eyes.
Entrancing, dramatic wonder
O' Aurora, child of light you mesmerize.
Blushing lights beyond brilliance
Words fail to describe such magnificence.
..................
Olivia J. Wright
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Comments
It's on my bucket list to one day see the Northern Lights, Olivia.
Your captivating poem and eloquent wording helped to take me there, if only briefly.
For that I am truly grateful.
Nice work!
~Dean Kuch
Hi Dean Thank You for reading me- and for your complementary comments.
When you finally get to see 'Aurora' you won't be disappointed that's for sure,
For it's quite spectacular ... And an Awesome (heavenly show)
Regards Olivia✍
I'm sure they are, Olivia and you're very welcome.
~Dean :)
Hello OLIVIA!!... as I read your final line I couldn't help thinking, although it may very well be true, your words surely brought a magnificence to the minds eye of the reader..., and THAT is what we poets aim to accomplish, for the most part!!....I liked the way you formatted this.... it added to the overall flow and helped the imagery to have more of an impact because of the way you broke your lines!!!......ALL STARS!!... well done...... and....... WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ???✳✳
Hi Tony Thankyou for reading me and leaving a lovely review -
much appreciated bro ✍️
I have seen the auroa borealis and you're quite right describing them as mesmerizing. Thanks for painting emotions with words.
Thank-you for reading me Neil - l loved writing this particular poem -
And l hope l did the surreal
light show the ....justice it deserves
Regards - Olivia~
Excellent! Well written, congrats on your nomination... ????
Thank you Wayne - for your positive comments much appreciated’
dear poet.. ✍️