Poem -
Bars that held me
I stood so long behind bars
That showed no mercy
I face a penance for a crime
I committed
But not in this time
I dreamt and dreamt of breaking free
Of flying, of soaring in the open sky
But as the rusted bars swung open
I couldnโt will myself to take off from the ground
I didnโt have anywhere to go
No one to turn to
I didnโt know where I belong
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I can totally relate nice poetry
angelย
:) thanks angelย
The will to overcome often comes in the form of dreams.... and the confusion that follows can be overwhelming!!....... interesting read!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo โค
:)thank you,it's a genuine write
Finding a place in this world for me is difficult, I feel that past lives are impeding on my life here, I fear the next life and wonder about reality, it seems to be a common feeling amongst humans, we are trying to find God but I think God is trying to find us. Great write Sarah.
:) Thank you Gerard. this write is based on me thinking i'm not deserving of the life i'm living and thinking i must have done something in my past life to deserve it. But then again I am used to this life, I don't know anything else and then wondering if it's all in my head. ย
A truly liberating poem. Well done again, Sarah.ย
Tehmina xo
thanks dear that means a lot, i appreciate you stopping by :)
lovely though sad write x
thank u faith:)
I think all of us have felt like this--this sort of displaced feeling--at one time or another in our lives, Sarah.
I know I have!
Excellent poem, very well penned.
~Dean Kuch
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:) thank you dean, hope all is well with youย
I really love this poem <3
:) aw thanks dear
Amazing and wondrous masterpiece
thanks dear:)