" THE BIGGEST BUNCH OF WANKERS !"x?

" I,VE HAD THE BIGGEST BUNCH OF WANKERS
GOD EVER PUT ON THIS EARTH!
YOU,D THINK THAT MRS SATURN HERSELF
HAD ACTUALLY GIVEN BIRTH!
FROM THE PITS OF HELL ON THE FILTHY EARTH!
NOT ONE OF THEM RECONIZED MY WORTH?
I SHOULD HAVE GIVEN THEM ALL A WIDE BERTH!!
MOST OF THEM , THOUGHT WITH THEIR GIRTH!
TO ALL THE USERS & THE ABUSERS
SO BUSY LYING & PLAYING MIND GAMES
ALWAYS POINTING THE FINGER
OF COURSE, I WAS ALWAYS TO BLAME ?
I FAILED TO SEE THEY WERE PAST BEING TAMED !!
IN MY ROSE COLORED SPEX
THEY ALL LOOKED THE SAME
NEVER KNEW, THEY WOULD DRIVE ME INSANE ?
GET INSIDE MY HEART & MY BRAIN
SHOULD HAVE THROWN THEM ALL
UNDER THE NEAREST TRAIN!
NOT ONE OF THEM COULD TELL THEM TRUTH!
CAUSED TOO MANY GREY HAIRS ON ME ROOF !
I SHOULD HAVE KEPT A LIST!
TO SHOW YOU ALL THE PROOF
BUT , I TRY SO HARD TO FORGET THEM ALL
& THAT,S THE GODS HONEST TRUTH
THE BIGGEST BUNCH OF WANKERS!!!!
WHO COULDN,T HAVE BEEN MORE UNCOUTH!
YOU,VE ALL BEEN AWARDED " THE GOLDEN KNOB"
& IM JUST SO THANKFUL THAT I NO LONGER
HAVE TA LISTEN TO THE SHIT THAT CAME OUT YA GOBX
Tracy Timothy xx
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You've gotta be a be a scouser Tracy surely? Funny as f*ck, can I just give you a bit of constructive criticisim? What let the poem down was the amount of times you used the same rhyming word, I feel that just using the rhymomg word once on each two lines I mean would greatly improve the quality of your writing, the rhythm's good just work on the repetition of ya rhymes.
YOU ARE WRONG ON SO MANY LEVELS JULIE-ANN ! I AM 100 % ESSEX BORN & BRED X WE EACH HAVE OUR OWN STYLE & THAT IS MINE NO OFFENCE BUT I DO HAVE 100 MORE FOLLOWERS THAN YOU & THEY OBVIOUSLY THINK IM DOING A GREAT JOB BY THE COMMENTS & SUPPORT I RECEIVE AFTER EVERY ENRTY ! BUT HEY WE ARE ALL ENTITLED TO OUR OPINION THANKS FOR YOURS
lol apologies for the delay in seeing your reply, 100 more followers... Chicken feed girl...go check out my followers on Facebook under same name for my rap lyrics/videos...346,000 last time I checked and it's really not about quantity (although I have it in abundance, its about quality and I'd write you off the page...Go figure!