Poem -

Brainwashed

Brainwashed

I gotta be loosing my mind
Rotted away by music and tv
I thought I was doing just fine 
I'm afraid they've gone and brainwashed me
My life has been like a tv show
I hear the crowds  laughter when I crack joke
Maybe I should embrace this magic
Because when I close my eyes all I see is static
When I see her she moves in slow motion
Like I'm intoxicated by a love potion
If this is not real what's the harm
If I follow her home and put on the charm
Of course she likes me, I'm the main protagonist
With out me the show would not exist
But she doesn't seem to know her lines
Why is she acting like she's not mine 
Since this is only a show I'll spice it up a bit
I choked her till she couldn't resist
We lay there together all night under the censorship bars
Gazing up into the stars
The next morning I woke to the tv in my cell on the ant race
Back in the institution a television made basket case

By LukeCoomer (c)

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sparrowsong

Hello Luke...

You have made me ask...

When watching television with you?

Is it watch at your own risk?

Is their popcorn by any chance?

Snack before the attack...

Great write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Luke Coomer

Hahaha thanks sparrowsong you made me laugh out loud no worries about me but I did try to capture a disturbed mind that was raised on tv and it's clear I got that point across I wrote this today as a picture challenge on Facebook thought I'd share it here because I like to write from the point of view of a wide range of different characters and I was testing the waters for Cosmofunnel thanks for reading

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sparrowsong

Hello Luke...

You certainly captured something...

You put a lock on it and threw away the key...

Right? 

Just wondering...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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