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Carnal Cravings

Carnal Cravings

I am coming unglued–I’m falling apart,
I’m missing you, love, this is straight from my heart.
You’ve sliced me, you’ve diced me–like sushi in prep.
I hobble and wobble with each shaky step.

Cut me to the quick, oh your scalpel’s quite sharp!
Just like the Grim Reaper, you strum a dark harp.
You want me to dance to your despondent tune?
You give me a hard time–I’d give you the moon.

Cruel fate has stepped in and dealt us a death blow.
I cried–died inside–as I just watched you go.
You’ve never returned, now I’m here all alone.
The winters are frigid, I’m chilled to the bone.

I’ve resigned myself now to pure carnal desire
as love’s all but foreign, you’ve doused out that fire.
Pure pleasure, I’m seeking, let love go to hell.
Sweet ladies come over, I’ll pleasure you well…

Ā 

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Jen

Just melted wow just wow ? keep it fresh and clean mind blowing ?ā˜ŗļø? xxxxxxxx

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Dean Kuch

Wow is good, right, Jen?
Heh-heh-heh...
I'll try to keep keepin' it real.
I sincerely appreciate your supportive comments.
Horror Hugs!
~Dean ♄?♄

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Jen

Mind blowing xxx

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Nigel Cresswell...

Hi dean, instantly got me hearing Floyd, from The Wall;

Ā  Oh I need a dirty woman, oh I need a dirty girl.
Ā 

"No, I'm sorry sir. No it's a man answering"

Great write,
Nigell

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Dean Kuch

Hahaha, yes, I can see the parallels, Nigel.
Thanks very much for reading and commenting.
As always I deeply appreciate your viewpoint.
~Dean

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GREG TUCKER THE...

Yes Dean I agree with Nigel, that the words to Pink Floyd come to mind.Ā  Really enjoy the darkness you provide

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Dean Kuch

Thank you, Greg.
I really enjoy your feedback.
I'm sure PF probably had an influence on me. They're one of my favorite bands.
Thanks again.
Pleasant screams!
~Dean (No "o")

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Dean Kuch

Hahahaha...
I guess that means you thought it was okay, Gail.
I'm not sure, it could mean just the opposite.
In any event, I appreciate you taking a peek.
Pleasant screams...
~Dean
♄~ā˜ ļø~♄

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RRG (Rebecca)

This is fabulous. From the picture to the final line. Great flow and rhythm. Bravo. :)Ā 
Rebecca

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