Carnal Cravings

I am coming ungluedāIām falling apart,
Iām missing you, love, this is straight from my heart.
Youāve sliced me, youāve diced meālike sushi in prep.
I hobble and wobble with each shaky step.
Cut me to the quick, oh your scalpelās quite sharp!
Just like the Grim Reaper, you strum a dark harp.
You want me to dance to your despondent tune?
You give me a hard timeāIād give you the moon.
Cruel fate has stepped in and dealt us a death blow.
I criedādied insideāas I just watched you go.
Youāve never returned, now Iām here all alone.
The winters are frigid, Iām chilled to the bone.
Iāve resigned myself now to pure carnal desire
as loveās all but foreign, youāve doused out that fire.
Pure pleasure, Iām seeking, let love go to hell.
Sweet ladies come over, Iāll pleasure you wellā¦
Ā
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Just melted wow just wow ? keep it fresh and clean mind blowing ?āŗļø? xxxxxxxx
Wow is good, right, Jen?
Heh-heh-heh...
I'll try to keep keepin' it real.
I sincerely appreciate your supportive comments.
Horror Hugs!
~Dean ā„?ā„
Mind blowing xxx
Hi dean, instantly got me hearing Floyd, from The Wall;
"No, I'm sorry sir. No it's a man answering"
Great write,
Nigell
Hahaha, yes, I can see the parallels, Nigel.
Thanks very much for reading and commenting.
As always I deeply appreciate your viewpoint.
~Dean
Yes Dean I agree with Nigel, that the words to Pink Floyd come to mind.Ā Really enjoy the darkness you provide
Thank you, Greg.
I really enjoy your feedback.
I'm sure PF probably had an influence on me. They're one of my favorite bands.
Thanks again.
Pleasant screams!
~Dean (No "o")
fab
Thanks, Susan!Ā :)
Wow
Hahahaha...
I guess that means you thought it was okay, Gail.
I'm not sure, it could mean just the opposite.
In any event, I appreciate you taking a peek.
Pleasant screams...
~Dean
ā„~ā ļø~ā„
This is fabulous. From the picture to the final line. Great flow and rhythm. Bravo. :)Ā
Rebecca