Casket Ready

I felt a sort of explosion in my spirit
Watchingย her casketย made me feelย weary
Despair Wasย filling the air it was terrible
How could this happen to the little old lady
We called her the littleย old lady in the shoe
She had so many kids and baby ย daddy's
She didn't no what to do.
Her kids was standing every where
You couldn't helpย but to ย stare.
She had finally died with a smile on her face.
That no one couldย erase.ย
Mr carter had been buttering her bread.ย
That is what they said that'sย how
She endย up dead I said no way.
ย "not at eighth six
Could this be fix?
onlyย if Mr carter
Didn't have a great big ย d_ _ _.
Casket ready
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wonderful write, just wondering in the third paragraph did you mean despair instead of disappear?
Lisa thanks a million (despair)
appreciate the kind words of .encouragement
LOL!!.... the last few lines cracked me up REBEKAH!!.....I hope you meant this intentionally to be funny...... because my friend and I were cracking up....... this was a very fun read my friend......ALL STARS...... well done sweet poetess!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS !!......T xo.ย ย ?
thanks Tony you are truthfully inspirational.
hugs and kisses