Castles in the sky
I ran and ran and ran
to the castle in the air
I danced and danced and danced
beside my kite that flew up there
I stood upon the sun
and jumped on a cloud called 'nine'
and in a silent whisper
I was told that cloud was mine
I stayed up in the air
until tear-drops overcame
and with a sudden gust
the tear-drops turned to rain
But miracles, oh, miracles
I know that they come true
for where there should be rain
the sky above was blue
Suddenly I felt myself
floating - oh, so high
and my world became
the full, bright world
of castles in the sky.
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Comments
What a very dreamy poem! I want to go to that castle in the sky...lol...You created some beautiful imagery. I am glad I caught your poem on Cosmo. I love it. xo ;)Â
Thanks Cherie, we leave for the castle in 5 minutes - pack your bags!
best wishes and safe travels,
Owen xx
Wonderfully penned angel
Thanks Angel. All the best x
Nice :)
Thanks Aaron. Cheers!
what great poem
Thanks Greg. All the best!
Great write Owen.Congrats.
Many thanks. Very best wishes xx
What a lovely poem :)
Thanks Jill,
had fun writing it - amazed at the response
take care,
Owen x
Beautiful,
Thanks Kay,
All the best x
Loved the poem!Â
Thanks Neetha,
take care
x