“Caught in the game”
“Caught in the game”(cold case #8)
Sixteen, wild and young,
is how the story begun and goes,
Money laundry is my game,
a black youth, high on life,
and caught up, in a world so cold.
Ways of the old, giving rite of passage,
to the ways, of the brand new,
My beginning was well known,
although my ending, was not to I, a clue.
Sometimes I wake, wondering whether,
I will make it, to the end of the day,
And yes, those are the days, of our lives,
that I just, rather not say.
Though this day, like all the others,
I wasn’t prepared for the game,
What transcended that day, left all who knew,
wondering for whom to blame.
We stepped into, a wonderfully planned day together,
just you and I, a day you and I,
were to have enjoyed, to the fullest,
so why would we both, have to die.
So the morrow to and before the story,
now to you, have just been told,
Now here’s, the circumstances in whole,
on how this story, first unfold.
Tempered in steal, is how I felt about me,
to have been, well known, the streets,
they’re my battle grounds and I boast,
the king of my throne.
Owed nothing to life but felt life,
owed the entire world to me,
Known never to turn, the other cheek,
is how I decided, my life would be.
Yet, you my lady, grew up on the north side,
in a calm and pleasant home,
Yours was the sheltered life, a kings castle,
jewel encrusted, with a marble dome.
Never to judge you, not to be my style,
take all that life has to give,
My motto, get all you can get,
till your cup runneth over,
it’s the only way to live.
On the freeway we ride,
never the thought of homicide,
with our destination clearly in sight.
Yet little did we know the many curves,
that life throw and the notions,
that we won’t make it this night.
On road marker mile nine,
a car approached close from behind,
with speeds of a hundred and above,
With many questions in mind,
plain to see, his head lights did blind
and I swore to kill him, on all I love.
As he approached from the rear,
a familiar voice I did hear, her ex-husband,
was the culprit at hand,
Never the less I got to stay strong,
throw that old dog a bone,
just as she too he, his wedding band.
It was just yesterday, that we both fought,
on him a gun pulled, that I had recently bought.
But today is a new day
and I can’t waste, yesterday’s victory,
a mouth full, I still taste.
So he pulled up vicariously next to our ride,
the gun bought, kept close and near my side.
Without any warning and to our surprise,
his vehicle against ours, he struck,
The car being midsize, like a boat we capsized,
due to his vehicle being, a (4) wheel drive truck.
So I turned to call your name,
no response was there,
from you that came.
So I reached to grab your hand,
then only did I see,
your blood run red in the sand.
I never knew, a touch could mean so much,
until your last breath to me you gave,
no matter how hard I try,
there was nothing left but to cry,
for you I could not save.
Yet little did I know, my life to was to go,
collapsed lungs and bleeding within side,
Your hand I clutched, you I loved so much
and last sight, I would see, before I died.
Our story would be told,
of our deaths on this cold road,
speeding is what they will proclaim.
Two spirits now in the night,
searching feverishly, for the morning light,
on a day that seems never to end,
Hand and hand we both now roam,
waiting the day, to return back home,
caught up in the game,
me and my girlfriend.
Jim
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Jimmy this made me well up, it's very rare for me to aswell. Such an epic love story and tradegy, brings back sad memories for me, but you wrote it well and I hope it raise awareness about speeding and dangers of the road.
God bless.
Hi Emma,
Thank you for the read, as well as kind hearted response, a compliment as such, spawning from you, means a whole lot and i admire your works, by far and need to find the time once again, to read and comment more, i guess all in due time. Once again thanks for the visit into my back yard and cheers from Florida!!!
Jim
Sir Jim Arnold Sir,
Excellent write. An Verse, well narrated for others to grasp so easily. Enjoyed. Happy to see your poems at Cosmofunnel now, Thanks for sharing, My applause, My vote too. Recommended
" Owed nothing to life but felt life,
owed the entire world to me,
Known never to turn, the other cheek,
is how I decided, my life would be."
Regards & Love to you Brother
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Brother and friend, Sir Williamji Sir,
First and foremost, i must send my congratulations and hellos and express my sincere sorrows, for not responding on the many wonderfully expressive poems you have laiden on this site recently, i must say, i have read many but find it hard to be seated, just for a quick minute to be able to respond, due to constant absences and obligations. Congratulations to Cosmo Funnel, on your election, as well, very well deserved and the right thing to have done and for all the right reasons... Everyone on this end, sends their well wishes, to you and all of yours.......Once i can settle down for a minute, i owe you so many comments, on so many poems.....
Take Care,
Jim
Sir Jim Arnold Jim Sir,
Thanks, Thanks a lot for your appreciation and love.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
A great emotional write Jim,very well narrated and felt all your emotions in front of my eyes with a sad ending, just perfect gave me the feel of watching a movie. And I could relate this incident to one of mine in life,where i met with an accident,unharmed.
Keep up your good work.
Dear Sir Jim Arnold Sir,
Congrats on your winning nomination
Regards & Love
Brother Williamsji Maveli
Thanks Brother Williamji and if and when i reach your pinnacle, i will feel as though i am back in the game once again.. Thank you for the vote and support Sir Williamji Sir...
Jim
Hello Piusha and thank you for the compliment and comment coming from yourself Emma and brother Williamji, it all means a lot and i am very glad, (Piusha), that your similar experience, did not hender you from being the person we all have come to know you to always have been, a warm hearted lady and wonderful poetess.Appreciate the words from you all, i recently had a death in the family that kinda left me with writers block and to receive praise from you (3), kinda (figuratively speaking), places me on the road to being, hopefully, back in the game again and last but never to be the least,thanks to cosmo funnel for all of their support as well....
Kindest of regards,
Jim
Dear Sir Jim Arnold Jim Sir, ( My Brother )
Piusha Singh writes well, though she is new she is having a spark in her inner mind.Thanks for your valuable comments, Sir
Regards & Love to you
Brother WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
That she is Sir Williamsji, a remarkable, poetess, storyteller and lady in general, is Ms.Piusha Singh. A great addition to Cosmo Funnel, she will be.....
Cheers to you both,
Jim
Thanks, dear Brother Jim
Willy
Fantastic read Jimmy really enjoyed it very emotional you did good Regards Graham
Thank you Graham, sorry for the late response but enjoyed the comment...Practicing some fictitious story telling...What is really amazing, is that powerful art you present.
Thanks Again,
Jim