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Champagne and Caviar

Champagne and Caviar

I once met a girl who changed the way I viewed the world

She had diamonds for eyes
Teeth of flawless pearls

Blood red lips...
The most seductive kiss...

Her touch was so addictive...

Hypodermic needles in her finger tips

Her song was a psychedelic symphony 
Unfinished and incomplete 

If I'd have ever of figured her out
​​​​​​I'd have took her home for my folks to meet  

And from that opening riff to the very last kiss

How could I resist?

I was sure she was the one

However I could sense the storm of her moods
Taste the lightening on her tongue

Tried my best not to upset her.. 
She's almost one with mother nature 

But then I made her cry...
And I saw the hailstones in her eyes..

Such a delicate creature 
But I'd have gone halfway to meet her...

I'd have given up my time with my friends. 
But once I started down that route...

Where would it all end?

So I made my excuses
And I said my goodbyes 

But I couldn't help but think of the possible champagne between her thighs

Maybe though there would have been no champagne...

Close but no cigar..

No instead of champagne 
There could have been caviar 

But still my mind would wonder
And my thoughts they did ponder

I couldn't help but think...

If her sister tastes like thunder?

(Fiction)

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Syd

Thanks Lucy. I just thought I'd try something a bit different xxx

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John Coggins

Excellent Syd! You've merged another style with rhyme and flow beautifully here. Thank you for pointing it out to me. I'm finding I'm slowly learning what I've been craving in my own writing , without becoming something totally alien with thanks to people like you, Tony T, Cherie, Lauren Dorf, poettessdarkly,dblankportrait , and many more to be honest. So I am grateful for the part you all play in my own development! 
Cheers mate☺

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Syd

You're more than welcome. I too learn from your writings and comments as obviously observed. Thanks for the kind ratings and reviews. You didn't have to leave them, I was just trying to help, but much appreciated - Syd 

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John Coggins

Mate, I give my opinion and credit when I find its due, I KNOW you wasn't fishing for credit, but it's totally deserved, from my point of view! I appreciate your help,  I feel like I need it at the moment. As I'm putting off writing anything at the moment until "divine intervention" steps in! Lol! I may have a long wait...☺

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Syd

Cheers John, as far as inspiration and clearing writing block go, I usually use drink or drugs. I know that's not good life advice but fuck it, I'm being honest lol. Good luck I'm sure you'll be just fine. Take care -Syd 

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John Coggins

Haha! Snap mate! I can find inspiration quite easily, it's style I want to improve. We'll see...
Thanks again mate ☺

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Syd

Lol! Your welcome. Have a good Xmas if I don't post in the mean time - Syd 

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