Champagne and Caviar

I once met a girl who changed the way I viewed the world
She had diamonds for eyes
Teeth of flawless pearls
Blood red lips...
The most seductive kiss...
Her touch was so addictive...
Hypodermic needles in her finger tips
Her song was a psychedelic symphony
Unfinished and incomplete
If I'd have ever of figured her out
I'd have took her home for my folks to meet
And from that opening riff to the very last kiss
How could I resist?
I was sure she was the one
However I could sense the storm of her moods
Taste the lightening on her tongue
Tried my best not to upset her..
She's almost one with mother nature
But then I made her cry...
And I saw the hailstones in her eyes..
Such a delicate creature
But I'd have gone halfway to meet her...
I'd have given up my time with my friends.
But once I started down that route...
Where would it all end?
So I made my excuses
And I said my goodbyes
But I couldn't help but think of the possible champagne between her thighs
Maybe though there would have been no champagne...
Close but no cigar..
No instead of champagne
There could have been caviar
But still my mind would wonder
And my thoughts they did ponder
I couldn't help but think...
If her sister tastes like thunder?
(Fiction)
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I like this one Syd, made me smile. Xxxx
Thanks Lucy. I just thought I'd try something a bit different xxx
Well I think it worked a treat xxx
Excellent Syd! You've merged another style with rhyme and flow beautifully here. Thank you for pointing it out to me. I'm finding I'm slowly learning what I've been craving in my own writing , without becoming something totally alien with thanks to people like you, Tony T, Cherie, Lauren Dorf, poettessdarkly,dblankportrait , and many more to be honest. So I am grateful for the part you all play in my own development!
Cheers mate☺
You're more than welcome. I too learn from your writings and comments as obviously observed. Thanks for the kind ratings and reviews. You didn't have to leave them, I was just trying to help, but much appreciated - Syd
Mate, I give my opinion and credit when I find its due, I KNOW you wasn't fishing for credit, but it's totally deserved, from my point of view! I appreciate your help, I feel like I need it at the moment. As I'm putting off writing anything at the moment until "divine intervention" steps in! Lol! I may have a long wait...☺
Cheers John, as far as inspiration and clearing writing block go, I usually use drink or drugs. I know that's not good life advice but fuck it, I'm being honest lol. Good luck I'm sure you'll be just fine. Take care -Syd
Haha! Snap mate! I can find inspiration quite easily, it's style I want to improve. We'll see...
Thanks again mate ☺
Lol! Your welcome. Have a good Xmas if I don't post in the mean time - Syd