Close Your Eyes

Deep into the world we seek the spirit of who we are
As we close our eyes we can feel inside, the mounds of hope
Love, blood that flows so deep it moves
Like running water it trickles down and we swallow
Then we smell the earths scents, the leaves, the trees
Rivers, and lakes, the coolness of the wind that rides
Through our mind, as you close your eyes
I want you to see me with no color of skin, no image of body
No features to admire, just hear my voice
Feel my heart beat, as I want the inner being of you
Enter my inner being, then we connect, like a key to a lock
It opens up and we enter, then we give into ourselves
We are laminated by our energies, as they now, can't get out
Until we open our eyes, and now our bodies rise, we caress each other
With our arms, legs give in, to the depth of two entwined lotus flowers
Floating together in a deep  meditation
Where love has connected, and no other can find us
We are inspired by the richness of our inner souls that meet
My eyes now, are closed for your taking
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Comments
Very nice poem. Use more commas and it will flow better, but good job.
Thanks Michael
Nancy
Michael,
You were right on it, it was a scrambled mess, either I was under the influence or my typing skills went mad!!
Thanks for your good advise, appreciate it!!!!
Nancy
No problem Nancy, I love your style so keep it up.
Thanks so much!!!!!
Take Care!
N