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A CLOSED MIND !?X

A CLOSED MIND !?X

IT,S AS IF, YOUR A CLOSED & SHUT BOOK !?
JUST STOP FOR A MOMENT. & TAKE A QUICK LOOK
REALISE FOR A MOMENT, HOW LONG IT TOOK !?
TO GIVE UP THE GHOST!
YOU WERE MUCH LUCKIER THAN MOST!
SO NEAR & YET SO FAR, FROM RAISING A TOAST!
IS IT THAT HARD TO EXPLAIN?
WHAT GOES ON IN YOUR BRAIN!
I FALL FOR WHAT EVER
IT WAS, TIME & TIME AGAIN !
ARE THERE NO LINES BETWEEN YOUR PAGES?
IF I GET A RESPONSE?
IT USUALY TAKES AGES
HAVE TO EXPLAIN TO YOU , IN STAGES
ARE THERE NO CHAPTERS
OR NO WORDS IN YOUR VERSE?
JUST EMPTY SHEET,S OF PAPER
IT COULDN,T BE MUCH WORSE!
YOU,VE USUALY GOT SO MUCH TO SAY!
SO IT TAKE IT, IT,S NOT A GOOD DAY?
& ALL YA WORDS , HAVE FADED AWAY
COS, YOU AINT GOT NAFF ALL TO SAY!
A CLOSED MIND,IS LIKE A CLOSED BOOK
JUST LIKE A BLOCK OF WOOD
COMPLETELY BLANK & MISUNDERSTOOD

Tracy Timothy xx

 

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

DEAR POETESS Tracy Timothy,

I REALLY ENJOYED, COMING CLOSER TO YOUR POETIC SYNTAX AND ERROS, MY VOTE 5*

REGARDS,

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Tracy Timothy

MUCH APPRECIATED AS ALWAYS WILLIE X OH & I SEE YOUVE GOT THE CAPS BUG LOL

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

BECOMING LAZY TO PRESS THE CAPS-LOCK KEY IN LIFE

REGARDS-WILLIAMS GEORGE

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