Poem -

Concrete Heart

author
Susan Chetcuti
Concrete Heart

Your
affection
turned 
cold
with
an 
attitude
bold
sent
us
way 
out
of 
touch
I've
been
hurting 
to 
much
sends
my 
thought
pattern
spinning
and
you
just
keep
grinning
go
and 
keep 
your
concrete
heart
thats
torn
us
apart
cause the
writings
on its
wall

 

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Tags: 
Heartbreak
Poetry Genre: 
Drama
Topic: 
Love
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