Poem -
Costly
A little Tanka
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Priceless gift to give,
Although it did have much cost.
Thanks WILL be as such,
Very soon you’ll see that day.
Matters not, the price is paid!
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Tidy refined work showing commitment to poetry.
Love your style !
Wishing you all you've dreamt of. Â Take care. x
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Richard, I Â always appreciate your feedback..... I keep trying my hand a different forms, to help delve further into this poetic land!! . Thank you so much for your encouragement.
Lorna xxx
Keep up the great work ! You shine when you write.
Warmest wishes. Â xxx
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(in response to your little tanka)
a true gift costs much
but outweighs that which was paid
to one who loves you
J xxx
Ahh, love your little haiku Jason
Gifts which keep giving
Through cyberspace and distanceÂ
Are worth more than goldÂ
Xx
?...ear to ear
?x
Hi  Lorna  Just Lovely!
So much said in so few words
Great write IÂ enjoyedÂ
Best wishes Debs x
Thank you Debs, im glad you enjoyed it,Â
Thanks so much for taking the time to read my workÂ
Lorna xx
Great Tanka Lorna....loaded with meaning.
Well written.......Mick.
Hi Mick, thanks for dropping by!! Much appreciated I'm glad you enjoyed it..?x
My Dear Lorna,
Oft the price is high
All that glitters is not gold
Platinum will do
Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Dear Larry
The higher the price
the more cost bestowed upon
Never to be paid
Love from Lorna xx
Enjoyed the read...thx
thanks Lorris xx