Curling Smoke

Curling smoke, metallic scented gun,
Still taste essence on tingling tongue.
Sanguine, like her lips, Laboriously ooze,
Reeking of pungent sex and cheap booze.
Prone she lay like cadaver on steel,
Guilt threatens to reject last meal.
Bloodstained sheets our passion bed,
Mocking, where we once placed our head.
Even stonecold, her lovely body enticed,
An obsession just too high priced.
Sirens serenade, reality closing in,
Reaching out to stroke gelid skin.
Closing vacant baby blue eyes,
In death, beauty spews no lies.
Kissing rouge lips once more.
Resignedly opening, pounding door.
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Awesome and my kind of write, grim in narrative and alluring with intrigue.Β Β
thank you kindly Simon. one small favor please give stars. I think since it has moved to the side of the picture people forget to give them.
I have added stars my friend just retried and it appears full then disappears? ? I did wonder how I was first to seemingly voteΒ
I don't like how that is now. it's new they are always changing the site. I do realize for the most part it's for the best