Dancing in the Rain

hey, Rose....just had to comment on how much I enjoyed reading this, it speaks to the reader of the eternal sunshine of the soul, despite the dark clouds and rain....besides, there is nothing more hopeful than a good steady outpouring in late spring....the mood you capture here is pure magic, an expressive, delightful read, cheers poet....talent galore

Hello Rose,

No matter what the plans of mother nature, don't allow her, or (any other), to rain on the parade, you have set into motion, (no matter how uredictabe mother nature or any other), can be. One thing (she won't be), is incompliance to our wants and desires, when they don't align with hers ..When she takes the low road, remain Content in your plans, to stay on the high road....You are the (Rose), that continue to grow through concrete and no one, has more influence over you then you. Sometimes life can be challenging and unprodictable within itself but your will power to always place your best foot forward, tends to out shine her rain.. No matter what her woes may be, (that day or any other), don't allow it to have any bearing on yours......Love this piece my friend...Jimmy.  

No matter what, I'm dancing in the rain

The masterstroke of this poem is that final line; for a piece made up of heroic couplets to end with a single, solitary line is a powerful statement about the subject, the poem and the poet.

A beautiful piece...tinged with sadness and regret, but with a spine of iron determination running through it too.

Wonderful!!

J x

Beautiful piece...the ferociousness of mother nature, and the want to dance in the rain she pours..

I love this

Lorna

Hi Rose,  " life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass,  it's about learning to dance in the rain "

Great ink!! 

Hugs and kisses 

Leah 

Hi  Sweet Rose Lovely lovely write you keep dancing in 
the rain my friend,
Beautifully written I very much enjoyed 
Lots of love Debs 

Sublime heartfelt poetry which gives so much to the reader highlighting connections between the soul and existence.

Great work of real substance.

Wishing you the best !  :)

Take care.

Excellent 

My Dear Sweet Rose,

I love your thought, that no matter what, you will keep dancing in the rain.  Mother Nature cries out, but you honor her by not giving up hope, and tiptoeing through her tulips.  For, if we all could share in your determination, the world might see us, and follow suit.  A lovely, powerful write.

I love you,

Daddio xxx