Poem -
DETONATE ME
You ravage me like wildfire
Setting me ablaze
Creating an inferno
Inside I am aflame...
Incandescent fury
Ready to combust
Beaming with intensity
Seething for your lust...
Impassioned arousal
Imminent eruption...
Detonate me!
Internal combustion...
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Comments
Carey I love this piece, fiery, passionate, brilliant write, definitely my cup of tea :)
5*s and a Nomination from me :)
Heya Jase :)
Thanks for your vote and nom much appreciated..Loved writing these last two pieces I just posted..gave me a little uplift I needed x
Thanks Iman, Angel and Cherie for your "warming" comments.. :) xxx
​brilliant write Carey
Maddison
Thank you Maddison :) always appreciated xx
Thanking you Angel..Sry for the late reply :)...I been a busy little bee :) x
Yes you have been a busy bee. :) Writing that poem about us three! LOL
You guys are too cute for school...
Wolf....Email her now!!!....(But play it cool) :P
Sista ....my doppelganger
Finally I have found ya
To be continued....
I'll know the time
Coz you guys will hear my commenting rhymes....Over and Out.........................zzzzzzz
Love yas with a Capital Q.....lolxxxx
excellent piece Carey..love the brevity and story told....Michael