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Double Lune - Angels And Oceans

blue swishing waters
send your signΒ 
to heavens front gateΒ 

your prayer arrives
angels answer with a featherΒ 
from a dove.
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K.G. Munro

Just to give a little background: This form is relatively new in poetry. The original form is a 13 syllable American Haiku structure created by Robert Kelly and the second version is a 11 word tercet structure created by Jack Collom. I decided to combine both versions to write this poem. Since both are known as Lune structure, I decided to call it double.Β Β 

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Yiyan Han

Well explained, and well written.

Much easier to compose with singleΒ syllable Chinese/Japanese Kanji ;)
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Marion

This is beautiful...personally I get answered with elastic bands...everywhere...a personal thing with great meaning x

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K.G. Munro

Thank you so much <3 and guardian angels are always there, at least I like to think so :)

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