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Duet

Duet

As words from a love song escape from the page,
they've taken that spotlight effect on the stage.
Two vocals of flawless awaken the crowd,
from the soft tone of low, to the high pitch of loud.

There's enchantment of echo that lingers the air,
it brings on a feeling, that one can't compare.
As voices combine, sweeping straight to the heart,
seductions voice flawless in playing the part.

It captivates pure, showering lyrics that flow,
from the crowd way up front, to the very back row.
It's emotion, devotion, much more than a glow,
a piece of perfection that's romancing the show.

This lyrical bond shares an act of divine,
entertaining you into its moment of time.
the gift of "Duet" played a lasting effect,
that's given much more than the touch of, perfect.

 

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Richard Waters

" TWO MINDS ARE BETTER, THAN ONE. " In art the combination of TWO TONES gives a piece a feel which generally haunts. Barbra Streisand did a " DUETS " album...found most pleasing, to most. The " sexual chemistry " involved, plus the intrinsic value of the work leaves none in any doubt about the worth of " teamwork "....on, or off " stage " !! It is in the representation of the absolute CREATIVE that greatest harmony will be ascertained, and appreciated. None, should dispute the effect of CONNECTION on quality within art.
There is connection of minds and connection of frame. The blend of both outside the " mating ground " within eyes of the populus stimulates understanding of life. And, what brings real satisfaction and reward. Plus, feelings of belonging and ultimate trust. The combined effort brings merriment and sense of worth because you SHARE common values and purpose related to that noticed most readily. The " WONDER " of you, is expressed best within a joint appraisal of the higher reasoning of " time and place " and the " here and now " !!  :)
You, write beautifully. You, must not cease in putting down what you feel or understand, whether it be in the public arena or not....because YOU HAVE  RARE TALENT, to convey in words what others can not. Superb communication skills. Skills which are always appreciated.
THANKS. X

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Susan Chetcuti

Thank you so much for your kind words Richard. It’s been awhile since I visited the site and I’m sorry I didn’t see your comment earlier. You have given me reason to continue writing as my love for it went astray for some time and sometimes I feel I’m not good enough. So grateful for your opinion?

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