Poem -
Empty Husk
I cried when you passed
my lifelong love
why did you leave me?
My lifelong love
I still love you,
miss you.
But there is a dark time
when I hate you
seeming,
much like a crime.
My life
seems destroyed
lonely and,
paranoid
my body,
of feelings devoid.
I felt like an empty husk
and in you,
I put my trust.
But you left me, to die
leaving me to cry.
I prayed,
in the dark of night
searching
for that light,
to release my mental chains
to ease my,
mounting pains
to take me to you
and
bid this world adieu.
© Alan Noakes
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Comments
You'll never know how much your words resonate here Alan...beautifully written x
Sry late reply, I am not sure wether to be pleased or sad by your response, sad because it resonated so well and pleased that you commented positively to it, nevertheless thank you Marion
Hi, losing a loved one is so difficult. So many stages to go through
really great price of writing
Lorna
Thank you for your kind words very much appreciated
Grief is a very complicated thing. I am sorry for your loss x
Complicated and disconcerting I appreciate your kind words.