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Fallen kingdom

Fallen kingdom

My heart is in your hands,
You have conquered all the lands.
All the women are held by the threat of a sword,
You’ve caged them like little birds.
You put me through all this pain,
Tears stream down my face as I die in the rain.
You watch my blood fall,
Now you stand tall.
My kingdom in pieces,
I just hope you find peace.

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Jason Brown

You put me through all this pain,
Tears stream down my face as I die in the rain.

This is an excellent piece of poetic writing.
The imagery is perfectly evocative and the keen edge of bitterness bites in every line.

Bravo!

J ;)

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BookWorm

Thank you! My freind and I exchange 3 words to each other to write poems and the words I was given were: Women, Blood, Pain. I love doing these little things. Thanks so much!

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