Fire

Well composed Shruti - I like a lot

:)

Hi Shruti,

Simple and humble lines, well crafted, thanks for sharing, my applause, my vote, my love, I like the below lines:

Play if you must
But don't burn your hands
The coldest of waters
That never stirred
Might just turn ugly
And into a raging fire.

Love & Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Hi Shruti,

I am sorry, something went wrong, below lines are excellent

" Play if you must
But don't burn your hands
The coldest of waters
That never stirred
Might just turn ugly
And into a raging fire." - Poetess Shruti Goswami

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Hey Shruti!!.......Never read you before (my loss).........I like this very much.........you make a good point............Play with fire long enough........and you're bound to get burned.......especially when lies and liars are concerned.........great sense of rhythm and timing on this piece............well done..........ALL STARS............Love and Rockets!!..........T xo