Flower Friends
Her Lily friend is white and mellowÂ
Her Daisy friend is kind and yellow
Her Tulip friend is blue and prettyÂ
Her Sunflower friend is gold and witty
Her Rose friend is red and stoicÂ
Her Lotus friend is pink and heroicÂ
and her very best bud
Flower friends are rare to come by, sheâs happy to have been born in the same mud Â
She thanks the Angel who planted her seed
After all, she couldâve grown up lonely among weed
Over time, her flower friends grew big and tallÂ
While she remained frail and smallÂ
Their necks stretched so long into the sky
the tiny flower could no longer hearÂ
What are you talking about up there?Â
There was no replyÂ
Instead of blooming, she started to wither
Far too soon, death came hither
with no flower friends with herÂ
Her leaves curled up and reduced to crustÂ
Her petals tore off with a single gustÂ
Her hollow body crumbled to dustÂ
Her flower friends didnât notice
or perhaps no longer cared
not even her best friend Lotus
thought the tiny flower, lonely and scaredÂ
This was her last hourÂ
This rain, her last shower
This soil, her home, now felt sour
and the fear made her cowerÂ
Goodbye flower friends
This is where it endsÂ
No matter how high your stem extendsÂ
There is no need for amendsÂ
But I ask of you, donât forgetÂ
All of our joyous memories in the sunÂ
And the day we met
I had a lot of fun
and I am forever in your debt
A new era has begunÂ
there is nothing I regret
so donât fret
I donât want my flower friends to be upset
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Comments
Your creativity shines here SAD GIRL!!......You have such a compelling way of delivering your intent.....with clever formatting and rhyme scheme......It was a pleasure to read!!......ALL STARS!!......well conceived and VERY well delivered dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Thank you so much Tony!! Iâm always happy to hear your feedback đ
This is a sad read, as the flower really seems to be suffering, but you have written it well so it is actually a pleasure to read it đ x
Thank you! :)
Hi again SG, I just wanted to let you know that I saw this the one the other day, forgot to comment and now, you are officially a contest nomination. Congratulations!! And such a well deserved write too. Your ability to apply unique and creative analogies to your poems is going to take you far as a writer. And its fantastic to read. I was especially Inspired by this one. Very very clever indeed. I hope you are keeping well, Max
Oh Iâm so happy to hear that, thank you very much Max!! Iâm always glad to hear your feedback :)
Hello Sad Girl.
I loved your analogies in this very creative write. There is such a hidden sadness carried by the flower, a quite suffering that is not wanting to burden those around with. I also really love the art work to this piece and think it compliments it perfectly. Not only is your work imaginative, but it carries such hidden wisdom within.Â
wonderful to readÂ
Gwen :)
That makes me very happy Gwen :) Thank you so much for your kind words!Â
Stunning poem , well written and carried theme . pleasant to the ears and eyes , superb poetry ! ~RobÂ
Thank you so much Rob!Â