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Flower Friends

Flower Friends

Her Lily friend is white and mellow 
Her Daisy friend is kind and yellow
Her Tulip friend is blue and pretty 
Her Sunflower friend is gold and witty
Her Rose friend is red and stoic 
Her Lotus friend is pink and heroic 
and her very best bud
Flower friends are rare to come by, she’s happy to have been born in the same mud  
She thanks the Angel who planted her seed
After all, she could’ve grown up lonely among weed

Over time, her flower friends grew big and tall 
While she remained frail and small 
Their necks stretched so long into the sky
the tiny flower could no longer hear 
What are you talking about up there? 
There was no reply 

Instead of blooming, she started to wither
Far too soon, death came hither
with no flower friends with her 
Her leaves curled up and reduced to crust 
Her petals tore off with a single gust 
Her hollow body crumbled to dust 

Her flower friends didn’t notice
or perhaps no longer cared
not even her best friend Lotus
thought the tiny flower, lonely and scared 
This was her last hour 
This rain, her last shower
This soil, her home, now felt sour
and the fear made her cower 

Goodbye flower friends
This is where it ends 
No matter how high your stem extends 
There is no need for amends 

But I ask of you, don’t forget 
All of our joyous memories in the sun 
And the day we met
I had a lot of fun
and I am forever in your debt
A new era has begun 
there is nothing I regret
so don’t fret
I don’t want my flower friends to be upset

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Tony Taylor

Your creativity shines here SAD GIRL!!......You have such a compelling way of delivering your intent.....with clever formatting and rhyme scheme......It was a pleasure to read!!......ALL STARS!!......well conceived and VERY well delivered dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  :  )

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Sad Girl

Thank you so much Tony!! I’m always happy to hear your feedback 😄

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Being Me

This is a sad read, as the flower really seems to be suffering, but you have written it well so it is actually a pleasure to read it 👍 x

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The fish of the sea

Hi again SG, I just wanted to let you know that I saw this the one the other day, forgot to comment and now, you are officially a contest nomination. Congratulations!! And such a well deserved write too. Your ability to apply unique and creative analogies to your poems is going to take you far as a writer. And its fantastic to read. I was especially Inspired by this one. Very very clever indeed. I hope you are keeping well, Max

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Sad Girl

Oh I’m so happy to hear that, thank you very much Max!! I’m always glad to hear your feedback :)

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Gwendoline

Hello Sad Girl.

I loved your analogies in this very creative write. There is such a hidden sadness carried by the flower, a quite suffering that is not wanting to burden those around with. I also really love the art work to this piece and think it compliments it perfectly. Not only is your work imaginative, but it carries such hidden wisdom within. 

wonderful to read 
Gwen :)

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Sad Girl

That makes me very happy Gwen :) Thank you so much for your kind words! 

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RG

Stunning poem , well written and carried theme . pleasant to the ears and eyes , superb poetry ! ~Rob 

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