Poem -
Forging Smiles
Breath easy love
For I am building wishes with dreams
Forging smiles
From flecks of light you dropped at your feet
I place them underneath my pillow at night
So they may tend to my troubled mind
Bind all worries to my sleep
Where your rainbows thatch a canopy of playful hues
Bemused, I shall learn to unhinge the mind from all things unkind
Place my feet in your fields of wild flowers
Feel their vibrant bloom
Inhale their grace
And finally plant a smile upon my sullen faceÂ
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Comments
Blindingly brill if you ask me .......... there are several particularly lovely lines I have already committed to memory and wish I had thought of before thee ............................ Neville x
Neville, a thousand thanks for reading and leaving such kind words. You just made my day 🙂 Thanks so much for the like and pin my friend xÂ
Wow!!! A poem of healing..( well we never heal but you know what I mean) ..and what words!!! What feeling in every word written here Gwen...this is maybe one of my faves from you...so glad I popped on and caught this...many hugs ❤❤❤
Wow thank you Marion for such a wonderful comment and so glad you liked the poem. Massive hugs đź’–đź’•
Such a feel good poem and an intoxicatingly beautifully worded one as well.
A real humdinger of fervent joy and upliftment in every line to raise every spirit and raise more than a smile.
Gwen you have written from your wonderful soul, that rare thing of beauty we all yearn to write, a true poem of light.
Full honours for your good self for doing so and for putting a smile on my face for the rest of the day.
And thanks for sharing your soothing balm and place of contentment.x.
Shaun, once again I am sorry to be replying late. I am so pleased to read that this popped a smile on your face :) thank you for seeing such good in me, for your thoughtful feedback that never wavers in kindness. For you are a truly beautiful human and soul. I am so grateful to know of your existence. I hope your weekend is going well and thanks again for taking the time to read my work in so much depth. I am forever thankful 🙏
Your friendÂ
Gwen đź’śxÂ
Like the beauty that is inside you....so the words you write....shine......like the sun hitting the dew on morning's flowers......you reveal to the world that vulnerable side of yourself that remains ever the romantic and the hopeful soul of love's most perfect and brilliant example......the world is a better place because of artistic souls such as yourself.....Thank you so much for sharing your talents and the feelings that resonate in your life and in your work!!.....PINNED for the beauty it is!!.......Bravo!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Tony, your words read like poetry, what a delightful gift to find against this poem. Your feedback reflects the beauty that is you my friend. For you have a heart of pure grace and elegance. It shines in your poetry, as well as your commentary. You are a natural wonder, a true pleasure to know. Thank you for reading and leaving your sweet thoughts here on this piece
Never stop being your lovely selfÂ
Gwen đź’śx :)Â
Still writing masterpieces I see Gwen! I don't have much time to spend on Cosmofunnel lately. It's all work, combined with lack of inspiration. Your writing however inspires me.
Take care - Syd xÂ
Thanks so much Syd for checking my poems. Been away myself and just came on today. Glad I caught yours, will check out your pageÂ
Stay well and all the best, hope you write some more soon xÂ
Beautiful write Gwen..
This is beautiful. This is a love poem. Gorgeous words here my friend xx
It is indeed Tina :) it is a mother's love and desire to make the world a happy place. Even when times are bleak, children can add colour and light to our lives. My son does every day. Thanks for picking up on this my friend xxÂ