Poem -
Goodbye
You yelled at my freind, being so mean,
Your little actions make me want to scream.
You came to my house without an invite,
I hate how you're always looking for a fight.
You cling to my brother and lead him on,
The only thing I want is you to be gone.
Please leave me alone, leave me be,
Take me out of this misery.
Fare well, so long,
You think you did nothing wrong.
You hurt and you lie,
Now I'll just say "Goodbye."
This was written because of a request by Krysten Whaley. If you haven't checked out her poetry, please do. She is a talented young writer. It's nice to see others my age are interested in reading and writing, like me. Hope you enjoyed the poem!
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Hey BOOKWORM!!.....I agree wholeheartedly with Cherie's comment to you!!.....compelling stuff dear poet sister!!.....ALL STARS!!.....well done!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?☀✴✳
Well, I wouldn't of written this if I wasn't given the request from Krysten Whaley. She told me a scenario that she's in right now and she asked if I could put it words. She said she wasn't very good (I disagree) and wanted my help. I saw it as a challenge, so I gave it a go. I'm glad you enjoyed though.
You did a fine job!!.....It's not easy to take another person's dilemma and convey it well poetically!....so....kudos to you my friend!!......smiles....T xo ?☀✴✳♥
Thank you so much!
I love it thank you so much. You have conveyed my feelings and i'm very grateful and now that I have read this poem I think I can finally move on and get her out of my life.
Your welcome! It was a fun challenge for me. I just thought about how you most likely felt and tried to portray it using the information you gave me. I'm glad it helped!