Poem -
Hear Me
Do you hear me
When I call
Do you see me
When I fall
Would you know me
If I told you
Would you love me
If I let you
Cuz I am all that's left of it
A land that was before
We thought that it was limitless
But now it is no more
Hear me
Calling
I'm standing on nothing
Why do I feel something
Here
I fear
Our mistakes could be the birth
Of the ones who destroyed the Earth
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this poem is filled with inquiry. the following stanza stood out for me:
"Hear me
Calling
I'm standing on nothing
Why do I feel something"
well done.
I'm glad you enjoy it. :)
A wonderful flow to this write Crimson King. An intriguing outlook and a profound message. This was structured perfectly and written really well. A vote and nomination from me, much enjoyed:)
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Great job Crimson
Thank you.
Nice flow and rhythm Crimson, I felt it dude well done, 5*s from me pal :)
Thank you so much.
Congrats on your winning nomination
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI
What winning nomination?
Your " Hear Me " poem has won a nomination in the poetry contest for May 2014.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI
OMG, that is spectacular!!! Thank you!