Poem -
HER DEMONS
She has created a world of her own
and lets no one in,
She hides behind a facade
to mask, her demons within
She knows she has qualities
and a huge loving heart,
But how can she stop the feelings
that tear, her apart
She reminisces often of
her life in her youth
Living for the moment a socialite
drinking vermouth
She was a happy soul
always a wink and a smile
she knows she has`nt been
like that, for a long while
She still has hope, someday
she will find her peace
From the grief she was dealt
to find some release
Until then she will fight
the demons of despair
And be once again that girl
with out, worry or care
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Hi Cherie... I agree i do exactly the same things put on a smile or hide away
Writing here helps a great deal though .And yes i am trying face the demons that
need to be gone to live a happier life, I love how you read a poem and describe
and comment the heart of it thank you for that love n hugs Debs xox
Hey DEBS!!.......I think everyone who reads this will be able to relate to this......... for, in some fashion....... God gives us all our own cross to bear........ rich or poor........ young or old........ it's a part of the elixir of life........... and though at times it appears to be difficult..... you then have the good fortune to come across a poem like this...... your shining positivity comes through again here ~ " Someday she will find her peace, from the grief she was dealt...".......... I'm likin' your stuff DEBS!!.........VERY compelling my friend..........ALL STARS........... well done......... Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
Hi Tony Thank you for your comment on this write I
feel these last two years of my life have been the toughest
in all my life, but i am seeing glimpses of the light now
if i were a painter i d say i have been i in my dark period :-)
I see it in my writes as well they are not all sadness and doom
now there`s that little glimpse of positivity in them which is my
aim to be more positive thanks for your encouragement
my friend love n hugs Debs xo
A superbly well written and well thought out piece Debs. I think we all do what you say in this one, and put on a show for the public. I write for therapy, it is a great release. I write from the heart and I`m an open book through my work as I can see that you are from reading your work. You are very talented and I`m proud of you.
Well done sweetie
Love G xx
Hi Georgina Yes i agree this one will be relatable to many people
and i am the same i write to get my feeling out what ever they
are at the time, Thank you for your kind words and encouragement
Love and hugs Debs xx
Hi ya Deborah. I love the flow and rhyme of your write, its as smooth....as your love for vermouth. Writing is a huge part of what helps me to battle demons. It's like putting your bad feelings in emotions and words and imprisoning them on paper. Sometimes it works and sometimes we get awesome writes like this. Nicely done. Peace.
Hi Devon.. Ha ha i hav`nt drank vermouth since i was in my twenties
but i enjoyed it at the time lol I`m more of a beer now and then type now.
funny that, how we hide behind a smile or facade but we pour it all out on a page
but it works well for me. I`m really glad you liked this one Thank you ... Debs
Hi our dear Debs,
I think the demons within, have been superseded by the angels without, those Heavenly cherubs that came from within you, and now, glorify your world. Be gone demons, for now you are a cliché. I cast you to the depths from which you came, as I soar to the sun, on the beauty of my offspring!
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Hi Lovely Larry Aww i love your little verse Its beautiful
Thank you so much for that love and hugs Debs