Poem -
Her Very Own Senryu
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Her Very Own Senryu
He wrote for her
a tiny song ..
Yet one without
a tune ..
My word, she said
how lovely ..
No senryu he replied
And then she smiled
and later chose
to wear those three
lines proud ..
Set horizontally
in fine
print and ink
somewhere below
the perfect
bridge, of her left hand
and milk white collar bone ..
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Comments
I learn from your style and words, nice write Neville!...................................Jim
Now that is one helluva serious honour & responsibility to lay on me my friend .. I just hope I can eventually live up to it ... In the meantime mate, many thank you's Jim, from me :)Β
totally leaves the reader with a sense of interpreting for themself, depending on whether you have dark inclinations or not. I feel like this could be either or. very well written ink.Β
That's kinda like what I was hoping for POETESSDARKLY .. Bless you my friend,
Yours intentionally ambiguously,
Neville :)
I keep saying it but i canβt help it. You are so good at capturing a moment. For me this was someone finding your loving words so wonderful, they had them inked onto their wrist. You brought such love and elegance to being tattooed πJust where my mind went xΒ
There aint nuthin wrong with that mind of yours, is there ... Thank you Gwen .......................................... x
Here... I imagine the words 'worn' in the act of making love, a deeply special and perfect rhyme between those in love... then again, I could be wrong...it was your reference to the 'senryu' that made me delve deeper...well, and the fact that I'm sitting on the settee eating ice cream with not much else to do lol...
...wonderfully clever write x
You got me salivating all over me trainers ... the Nike ones, that is .. not the pads I hasten to add Marion ... Thank you ma'am & no, she aint wrong ......................................................................... Nev :)Β