His presence

He breezes a shudder that grips her soul
an emotional presence that awakens a past,
captured in the romance of mystic.
Through the window the atmosphere blows a kiss
as tears fall through the echoes that surround the room.
Surreal, an effect as the wind disturbs the silence.
There is no breathe with whom it swept in,
but a faint figure that desires to touch her skin.
Her heart skips a beat as spirit and soul rekindle a flame.
The ghost of him remembers the warmth of love
as his shadow breaths cold.
She whispers his name as she captures a glance,
a haunted reflection that reaches out.
It's an unbelievable reality that comforts her,
to reminisce a time before passion slipped away.
As the mist embraces the occasion of an essence,Β
he is able to shower her, his final goodbye.
Β

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Wow!! SUSAN!!......this is beautiful....a powerful goodbye to say the very least......it stirs the imagination of the reader.....because of the well chosen words that create a kind of haunting phrasing ~
Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β ~ "The ghost of him remembers the warmth of love
Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β As the atmosphere breathes cold...."
Fantastic writing dear poet sister!!.....ALL STARS & PINNED!!......another fine poem to add to your portfolio!!.....Truly creative!!......Bravo!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xoΒ : )
Thanks for reading it Tony and keep up your fantastic work. Itβs been awhile since I ventured this sightπ
such a beautiful haunting write.
Thank youπ
enchanting!..........................................................................................Jim
Thanks for readingπ
A hauntingly beautiful poem, expressed superbly wow!! Kudos for this muse.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem tooΒ