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How the water Falls ( Natalie )

How the water Falls ( Natalie )

How the Water falls,
entrancing and deep marine,
Like the flow of light and dark,
as they swirl around me.
To be happy with what I have,
or to mourn loss long ago,
to learn to love again,
or rue the heart to forgo?
Let grief puddle like the basin,
or flow out like the urn,
to keep it all inside,
or leave the world to burn?
Is there any purpose,
any, then, at all,
to do other but simply,
see how the water falls...

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Beautiful, Dmitri!ย  Natalie kind of has to go with the flow (pardon the pun) so to speak....She has to learn how to let go and live....not hold onto guilt.ย  I cannot help but to think of a song by Josh Groban, called, "Remember When it Rained".....and think of your character, Natalie....Awesome poem. xo ;)ย ย 

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Dmitri Rudder

Thanks. She's going to go with flow until the Flashpoint happens, and she becomes invested in her pursuit.

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Dmitri Rudder

Thanks Poetess. Always nice to see you on one of my comment boards with some positivity and love.

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Mitsali Fatima

Beautifullyย done!
I love the way you'reย adding poetry to go with your story it really helps to paint a more vivid picture in my mind :)
Brilliant work!

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Dmitri Rudder

Honestly, I do it because A) My school's computers don't allow WattPad, which I tend to type on, and B) There is so much about the characters that I can't infodump in the book, and It keeps the details fresh in my mind until I can get home and type.ย  : ) I'm glad it's helping you, though.

Also, I like the new Profile Pic. Good choice.

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Mitsali Fatima

Tu esย vraimentย honneteย lol
and thanks I was getting bored of the old one :)

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Dmitri Rudder

On a essaiรฉ, non? C'est une vraiment travail.

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