Poem -
How the water Falls ( Natalie )
How the Water falls,
entrancing and deep marine,
Like the flow of light and dark,
as they swirl around me.
To be happy with what I have,
or to mourn loss long ago,
to learn to love again,
or rue the heart to forgo?
Let grief puddle like the basin,
or flow out like the urn,
to keep it all inside,
or leave the world to burn?
Is there any purpose,
any, then, at all,
to do other but simply,
see how the water falls...
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Comments
Beautiful flow and charm. I love your poetic cadence
Thanks Poetess. Always nice to see you on one of my comment boards with some positivity and love.
BeautifullyΒ done!
I love the way you'reΒ adding poetry to go with your story it really helps to paint a more vivid picture in my mind :)
Brilliant work!
Honestly, I do it because A) My school's computers don't allow WattPad, which I tend to type on, and B) There is so much about the characters that I can't infodump in the book, and It keeps the details fresh in my mind until I can get home and type.Β : ) I'm glad it's helping you, though.
Also, I like the new Profile Pic. Good choice.
Tu esΒ vraimentΒ honneteΒ lol
and thanks I was getting bored of the old one :)
On a essaiΓ©, non? C'est une vraiment travail.