Poem -
I AM A NAIL
Like 9 Pin it 4I AM A NAIL IN
BOX ON THE
SHELF YOU
COME ALONG
AND BUY ME
YOU BUILDED
HOUSE YOU
HAMMER ME
IN THE FLOOR BY
THE DOOR WHERE
I SIT FOR 100 YEARS
EVERY TIME THE DOOR
OPENS PEOPLE WALK
ON ME AND IT RAINS AND
THE SNOW GET ME WET
A 100 YEARS GOES BY AND HEAR
THEY MAY REMODEL
THIS OLD HOUSE SO TAKE ME
UP AND PUT ME IN PILE IN THE
CORNER WHERE ALL THE OTHER
BENT NAILS ARE NOW I AM JUST
NOTHER OLD BENT NAIL ON
MY WAY TO NAIL HEAVEN
I WAS NAIL IN THE FLOOR
BY THE DOOR
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Comments
Wow Greg this is so lovely cleverly creative I love it loads.... The life of an old nail 🌹💕🌹
thank you Jill
one day i was
sitting haveing
coffee on this porch
that had wooden floor
and looking at all the
nails in the floor and
thought mmm theres poem
Awww I simply adore your mind Greg 🌹💕🌹
🌹🌹❤️😇
🤣💕🌹
The life of a simple nail Greg...nice write 🤗
Thank you Marion
made me smile its simplicity and creativity
Thank you Linda
Very nice piece 👍🏼😀
Thank you John
Wow GREG!!....this is so unique.....so VERY creative......it reminds me of something that Pablo Neruda would write......I LOVE the closing lines ~
~ "I was a nail in the floor
By the door...."
Too cool brother!!.......ALL STARS!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Thank you Tony Really Padlo Neruda that’s awesome to compare me to him wow Thank you Tony
Hi Greg,
Sounds like you nailed it -
well done.
Regards,
Terry.
xo
Thank you Terry
I love this Greg! It's just brilliant - a tale of a life of a nail!! Pinned! Px
thank you Pratibha
Greg another imaginative and original write and beautifully presented through out.
One of those poems you just don't want to end to read on and keep reading.
A joy from its beginning to its heavenly nail end.
Full honours and gladfully given.
I wish you well and enjoy life and all the good it has to happily offer.
Thank you agin Shaun
Very clever poetry Greg. You are an inspirational and super creative writer my friend!
thank you so much
Fish i was sitting on this porch
that had wooden floor and i was
looking at the nails and thought
what wonderful poem it would make
thank you for reading
You just nailed it mate .. well n truly :)
Thank you Neville
You are seriously welcome sir .. N :)