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I hope to be...

I hope to be...

Impetuous scratching,
Harrangue & self loathe,
Crumpled written ramblings,
Pressure & tone of mauve.

Tethered to false hope?
Meagre & forced finesse,
Dried up ink, I can't cope,
Trash full of written mess.

I revel in afflatus,
I construe what I feel,
Sometimes fortuitous,
Most do not appeal.

I often refashion,
An attempt to relate,
I cannot deny my passion,
I hope to be great.Β 

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Pratibha Savani

I love the last verse. An excellentΒ  dissected piece on the writing process.Β  Think we all strive to be that. Fabulous Simon glad to see you back on here!! ? Px?

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Being Me

Keep all those ramblings! Don't bin them! Keep them.. All of them... In a book or on the computer, wherever you like, but NOT the bin. One day part of those ramblings may come in very handy for something you are writing. Never diss a rambling, ramblings have the power to grow into something great. Nurture your ramblings, Simon ? x

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