i miss you
The snow is on the ground and I am looking out the window just like every day
it must be cause I miss you. I see the kids at play riding their sleds and building snowmen I see us there tossing snow at each other laughing it must because I miss you
it was in the fall when we walked arm in arm around the park making plans for our future
I still hear how you wanted the house with white picket fence over on the boulevard
I am looking out the window just like everyday it must be cause I miss you you would tell me that you would always be there and we would share all our joys and heartaches. I remember the year I bought a puppy you kept me up all Christmas eve that year. I can the tree you planted it has grown so big. When you planted it was a little sapling. I am looking out the window just like every day it must be cause I miss you.
I recall the night you said you were going out with the girls, I teased you saying don't drink tequila we laughed and laughed, you dress in that dress I really liked and off you went with your friends that was the last time I seen you I wonder where you are, you just disappeared, they say no trace no clue, it is a mystery. That was over 10 yrs ago. I have looked and looked but you are not to be found I am looking out the window just like everyday it must be cause I miss you.
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Hi There you all out there in the world
Please comment on my poems as I'm new to the word of poetry
Thank you
Noema
Wow Noema,
I read this and loved it from word one to the very end and the bottom of my heart fell off for you. First and foremost, i pass on my condolences, on the lost of someone so dear to you.It's hard losing someone you love and to have to realize that you have to come to terms, with their lost, is a feeling i just as you wish no one else, ever to have to experience in life.It would be a wonderful thing if we could know the future are at least, all that governs our (six sense), whereby being able to determine, when the heart and mind feels and can tell, a better and stronger story, of being safer not doing what our immediate wants, cravings and desires, has in store but unfortunately we can't and then we are only left with the aftermath, of the pain we so sad and selfishly don't want to have to face but once again, unfortunately have to and why should we have to? This situation is sad, just as many more, told by others before you and i am so sorry, that it transpired in your life but trust that you spunt some precious time with her, throughout her life and more than any, that night before your tragic loss, you shared (it sounds), with her, some of the most sincere and precious, emotional moments and advice, you could have ever given to her but nothing dear lady, can deter what fate has in store, no matter how much love, you shared that night, God loved her more and had to bring her home....Keep looking out that window and keep your love a live, because without you realizing it, that same open window, you use to hold on to her memories and love, she too, is utilizing it, in order to look in and over you... It must be cause She miss you, just as much as you her....A very beautiful and extremely emotional poem.......
God Bless You,
Jimmy
first Jimmy i have to sorry it took me so long to reply to you comment, but i have never had a comment that was so full of emotion and praise, i was taken back by it, but thankyou so much for the comments i just wrote what i was feeling that day . I an so proud the my poem touched you on such a deep level iam finding that if i can touch just one person a little with my poems and stories i have done whati set out to do . Again Jimmy thank-you so much for the comment it means ever so much to me have blessed day and life my friend yours wendy