I Surrender
I thought I could do it on my own
Didn't hear all pleas to come back
I tried to go far away from home
My reason, I'm not treated fairly
Others get much with little effort
With much effort I get nothing
Then in the still small voice
I heard Him loud and clear
He said how I live is my choice
Clay can't question the potter
How it's molded shouldn't be questioned
The choice to do as pleased, is the potter's
I realize His thoughts are far
And His ways are not like mine
They are difficult to decipher
I'm sorry if I assume too much
I'm sorry if I feel I can do it on my own
I'm sorry for even having such thoughts
Where can I go without Him?
No matter how fast I try to run
I can never hide from Him
Now I know better… I can't go far
He is everywhere and knows everything
I have no choice…I surrender!
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Dramatic intense meaningful work beautifully written !
Warmest wishes to you !
:)
Thank you very much Sir...I'm honored to have you stop by
:) Thank you so much for sharing your creativity !
Warm wishes !
edifying spiritual write from the heart, Rose, and yes 'surrendering' is the hardest thing, yet it is the most important in the spiritual realm, superb poem my friend, so happy to see you write this, cheers poet
Yeah it is the hardest but we can't grow if we don't surrender...I'm happy to see you on my page...Your words made me smile...Thank you very much
Beautiful write Rose and very touching!!
XOXO
Thank you for your beautiful words!
Rose great poem God will always be there great poem 100 stars
He'd always be there no matter how far we want to go from him...Yaaay!!!...Thanks a million for the 100 stars...I'm dancing!!
Hi Sweet Rose This piece is wonderful
I love the imagery of the potter and the
clay, very creative I love your proclamation of
surrendering to god
A great write my friend!
Lots of love Debs
Hi Rose, it takes a lot to completely trust, God is everything and yet it's still Funny how we Harbour doubts in our hearts. Great write. Loved this. Lots of love and hugs.
Yeah...It's indeed funny...Imagine, if He can create the world, what it it that He cannot do for us?....Thanks you very much Cleo...I'm glad you like it...I'm smiling right now...Lots of love
Thank you very much Debs...It's rewarding to now you love it...I'm thrilled!! Lots of love
Excellent ...Rose.....Thank you
Thank you very much....
Gorgeous work girlfriend!!... its such a pleasure watching you blossom....... you rock your ROSE-NESS!!....... high fives.......T xo. ?✳✴☀
Yaaay!!!....Been missing you here lately....It's such a pleasure to have you here...You've just made me smile...high fives boyfriend!!...
Thank you very much Flower...I've really missed having you here...I'm glad you've blessed my page with your ink...Lots of love to you too...
My Dear Sweet Rose,
.
My white flag flies in azure skies
I surrender to my Lord
I questioned Him with ideas surmised
But then reached deep into my hearts core
.
I found this hundred pounds of clay He took
To create my loving soul
That He was going by His sacred book
And I should ever Him extol
.
My Love To You,
Daddio xxx
Hey Daddio...Thanks for summing it up beautifully in this verse...Your words are so on point...I'm glad you stopped by...Thanks a million!
My love to you too
Hi Sweet Rose,
I will never stop "stopping by".
All my love,
Daddio xxx
You've just made me smile...
All my love...