If I Close My Eyes
if I close my eyesĀ
will you come to me
will you breathe inĀ
my scentĀ
allowing theĀ
very thought of myĀ
desireĀ
to drench your tongueĀ
as I hear you lick your lips
smiling slylyĀ
knowing you are gettingĀ
ready to come undoneĀ
come a bit closerĀ
press your bodyĀ
against my ownĀ
slowly remove myĀ
clothesĀ
as your teeth brushĀ
my earĀ
whispering yourĀ
wants, while pushingĀ
back your fearĀ
yes. whispering....
all of those things thatĀ
you keep deep withinĀ
afraid if you voice themĀ
barriers will be downĀ
restraints will bustĀ
to the groundĀ
as your primal hungerĀ
wouldn't be deniedĀ
another moment
still.Ā
I say...Ā
tell meĀ
hunger released
hands begin to pleaseĀ
are you ready for me?
if I bite, do you promiseĀ
do bite back?Ā
for this is no time for tactĀ
my curves are yourĀ
secret paradiseĀ
ready for yourĀ
pleasurable attackĀ
please ....
don't hold backĀ
touch me likeĀ
you own meĀ
trail your tongueĀ
down my bodyĀ
in circles,
mmmm... then inĀ
straight linesĀ
devour me withĀ
your passionate rawnessĀ
don't be kindĀ
grab meĀ
as I wrap myself around youĀ
scratching my nameĀ
in your backĀ
swallow me with yourĀ
aggressive gulps
yes...
just like thatĀ
f*ckĀ me with your fireĀ
thrusting hardĀ
in and outĀ
leave not one inchĀ
wastedĀ
untouched or undoneĀ
until I amĀ
shakingĀ
screamingĀ
your name outĀ
pleasure comfortsĀ
painĀ
there is so much healingĀ
to gainĀ
to waste another momentĀ
would be quite a shameĀ
if I close my eyesĀ
will you come to me?
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beautiful poetry, SoulWhispers....you are excellent at building a scenario; (poem is the expansion of a thought triggered by a cherished memory, no?) the meandering movements subtle buildupĀ impressive restraint against the currents of primal urges screaming, before release is granted, speaks of your mastery of this genre, and control of the dance, here; erotica is difficult to pull off and suspend disbelief of a good reader, most poets are not good at it at all, it's not a mad dashĀ lacedĀ with profanity to the finish line....hey, love how you mentioned 'scent' scent triggers memory like nothing else; can take you right back to a moment, a particular scentĀ is hard to describe but you use it paired together with intimacy, so the players understand the scent, that is clever, you make hard things look simple....
this poem is hot,Ā intelligent five star quality gourmet feastĀ with much skill and care givenĀ in the preparation....enjoyed, poet....the pull quote resonates ferventĀ heat, well done. Ā Ā Ā
'touch me likeĀ
you own meĀ
trail your tongueĀ
down my bodyĀ
in circles,
mmmm... then inĀ
straight lines' Ā Ā Ā
Thank you dear Poet...for your depth of insight and beautifully shared thoughts.Ā
Your words are deeply appreciated.Ā
Your erotic writing has a clarity and understanding which gives them significant appeal !
Great.
Warmest wishes ! Ā :)
Sorry, "gives it significant appeal" Ā !! Ā :)
Thank you so very much.Ā
I appreciate your read and lovely shared thoughts.Ā
Thank you for sharing ! Ā :)