Poem -
If I could disappear.
If I wasn't here,
I don't think I'd be missed.
Probably be a favour,
For those who dismiss.
If I weren't around,
The world would keep turning,
The sun would still rise,
And it's flames still burning.
If I weren't alive,
If I couldn't be seen,
I wouldn't have to hide,
My face in false screen.
If I disappeared.....
No more pain and hurt,
No more broken promises,
No more reminders of failure,
No more anxiety,
No more pain.
No more pain.
No more pain.
Just perfect silent bliss,
A loud quiet of peace,
A comfortable void of empty fullness.
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Comments
Excellent poem Lucy. "A loud quiet of peace". Great line. I would imagine that a lot of people would be able to relate to this one.
What I say often though is that suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem.
I know this poem isn't to be taken literally though. Take care - Syd xo
Just thoughts from a deep and dark place. Better to let it go xxxx
Hi Lucy excellent poem sad emoitions very hard thoughts linda
Thank you Linda xxx
WOW!!......stunning!.....I feel confused and pray that this is just a fiction!!.....love to you and yours LUCY!!.....I'll revisit this piece another time!.....your cyber-friend and admirer!!....T xo?
Just the monster rising in wake once more xxxxxx