If I die...
If God decides to call me home
And you wake up to find me gone
I know your heart would be broken and you'd be sad
'cos you'd miss me and everything we've ever had
When you think of those wonderful moments shared
Or even times not so good that we have shared
One thing you should know is I'd never leave you
I'd always be by your side to guide you
When you hear a sweet whisper in your ears
That's my way of telling you I'm near
When you walk and you see another shadow beside yours
That it's my way of walking with you through the years
I've tried to please the Lord while here... though not perfectly
It's only a transition to the other side of life…actually
I'd really miss you as much as I know you'd do too
But it's the way of all men and it's just like a queue
One sweet day, we'd reunite and live together forever
And I hope our love would be as strong as ever
Know that I'd always love you even in death
So, if I die…Don't cry
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Hello Sweet Rose...
Though we all get a different address...
The process is the same...
It's the transition that's different...
I told my family and friends when they think of me smile try not too be sad...
We all go through it and we should celebrate it...
Beautiful write!
Thank you for sharing...
Lots of love
sparrowsong
True....They'd definately be sad 'cos they'd miss you...It's not easy losing a loved one...No matter how many we lose..we can't stop grieving when we lose another...Thanks so much for stopping by Sweet Sparrow...I'm glad you did
Lots of love
WOW!! Your ROSE-NESS!!.....I absolutely LOVE the way you laid out the carpet here..... in the picture and the pristine words of welcome .........it's beautiful my friend....... the afterlife..... love your mind sweet poetesss!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo ?♥♥
Yaaaay!!!....Your words always make me smile...Thanks a million..This means so much to me....LOVE and ROCKETS!!
Hi Rose, excellent job with the words in this write, very sweet and consoling. Lots of love and hugs. Cheers.
Hey Cleo...Thank you very much...This means so much to me...Lots of love
Such a beautiful, heartfelt piece.
Truly inspirational, wrapped up in unconditional love.
I'm thrilled you stopped by....Thank you very much
Hi Sweet Rose Beautiful words to say that
love will go on in the next life,and is unconditional
You have such a compassionate heart dear friend
Great write!
Lots of love Debs
Yaaay!!...It feel so cool to have you here...Thanks so much for your sweet and kind words...I appreciate....Lots of love
Excellent write Rose a pleasure reading...Thx
Thanks a million Lorris
Such a beautiful poem, it really captures loss and the pain we have from it, as well as the comfort that a loved is waking beside us through life's hurdles.
I really enjoyed this
Lorna
Xx
Thank you very much...I'm thrilled you enjoyed it...Thanks for stopping by
My Dear Sweet Rose,
"Au Contraire" dear sweet Rose
You are the life of the party
God needs you on earth to bring joy into many people's lives
You won't be packing your suitcase for many, many decades
PERISH THE THOUGHT!
Love,
Daddio xxx
My Sweet Daddio...Amen....The thought cross my mind can't really explain why... I have many decades to enjoy with my Daddio, Linda & Cody
Love you
You made me cry Rose;
this is feeling poetry at its best
throwing the gauntlet at the reader
to emote; left me with a lumpy throat.
Great piece.
LuVvv Jai:)??♀️
I'm sorry I made you cry... I actually cried while writing this. Cant really say why I wrote this but I had to.... Thanks for your words.. I'm humbled to have you stop by
highly emotive poetry of the heart, Rose....it's so honest and intimate as well, you really captured the purest colors in loves' kaleidoscope, such a pure expression of eternal devotion, this is inspiring...you've touched a park of my dark cynical heart today, impressive writing, poet
Your words made me smile.....Thank you very much.... I'm honoured to have you stop by my page... I appreciate
Rose this great poem this poem so great it makes my poem the oak tree in the cemetery look bad but that's ok bec your poem is so great wow
Not at all Greg....I'm sure yours too is great...I'd check it out....Thanks a million for stopping by
Hi Rose, I don't think I can describe " death " so beautifully as you do ##I am pinning this!!
Thank you very much Leah.... I'm honoured to have you pin my write
Lots of love
This work certainly pulled at my heart strings.
I looked at my husband as I was reading and these are things I say to him often.
Awww!!....I'm glad to know that.... Thank you very much for stopping by.... This means so much to me
Following.
You have a wonderful old soul.
Following too.... You made blush... You sound like one too....Thanks a ton!!
Anytime Rose.
May more beautiful works blossom from your heart-mind and soul.
♡m
This is simply superb my darling and it makes me so proud of you.
I love you deeply
Mum xx
Thank you very much mum...There's nothing more rewarding as making one's mum proud!!...
Love you deeply...Your little Rosebud
Hi, Rose. This is beautiful, We have recently lost a dear friend and I hope you wouldn't mind me having this framed for his lovely wife?.
Please go ahead and do so...I pray she feels comforted...It would be rewarding to know my write makes her feel better...My love to her
Thank you so much, Rose. I know it will be greatly appreciated and comforting.
Hi Rose,
You make death sound as though it's o.k. to let go my friend, no matter what value the stamp, sorrow has placed upon the envelope, during the day of its final deliverance....Whatever stage of theatrics, we have placed and perceived death to be upon, in the after life, from our fathers before us. You have dispelled and totally erased, such an unpleasant myth, in this elogantly written and self acceptance, of our fate, by all mankind...That in fact, (just as you state), it's our loved ones, that sadly has to be a part of the process, which makes this inevitable journey, embarable to have to live without but knowing even death, has no strong hold nor bearing, over the will of human love, allows us to know and accept, that death doesn't hold the blue print, to what means, love has to end, in life or even afterwards.....You laid this out beautifully Rose, Just as the image chose to represent this piece of poetical justice....Jim.
It's consoling to know that there would still be another life after we've left this side...More consoling is the reunion thereafer....Thanks for your words Jim...It's always a pleasure to have you on my page
Lots of love