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I'm mine

I'm mine

Listen to me,
lads and lasses,
I have something to say.
I know that people hate me
that's fine
but who said they could rate me?
I'm mine 
I'll never bend for you
just try
May devils send for you
I won't cry
I'm strongly weak
but weakly strong
and that's me 
there's nothing wrong.
I'll bite
I'll fight
So listen close, 
listen to my tune
I'll never sing your song
You won't bring me to ruin
because I'm me
I'm fine
I'm mine

 

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sally

Thank you Edward!
It's not really my style but I just decided to put it out there :)

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Simon Bromley

Bravo!  Stay true to yourself and break yourself for no one!  Well written.

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sally

Awe thank you, Simon!

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sally

Thank you Ian :)

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sally

Thank you lots, Kieran!

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lodigiana

A wonderfully powerful piece Mitsali..a great read !   Lodigiana x

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sally

Thank you so much dear poetess!
You guys are just my inspiration and support :)

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jick magger

Canny good that mind, respect and kudos 

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sally

Thank you! Feels good to be praised like that :)

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Anthony Yormesor

A strong statement from a vessel of confidence. This is excellent Mitsali. Thumbs up.

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sally

Thank you lots, Anthony :) 

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Terry Kay

Mitsali,
Oh, you tell em!  Stand strong write..loved it!  Terry Kay

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sally

Awe thank you Terry Kay :)

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Goode Benjamin

It’s great to be able to pep talk oneself. And have the confidence, and inner strength to be able carry it through. Great work ?✅

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sally

Awe Thank you Benjamin :)

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Ella

OMG!! I so relate to this poem!! Love every verse!!! amazing!

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sally

Thank you, Ella!
Good to see you back :)

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sally

Awe, thanks Abhigyan :)

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Dmitri Rudder

To find those special meanings,
which only we can do,
the most important step,
is to first know you are you.

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sally

I agree completely!
Thank you for that :)

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Dmitri Rudder

Who am I
What is me,
what takes my form,
and lets it be,
not from within,
not from above,
not from hatred,
not from love,
'by the smiles around me,
by the disgust in their eyes,
by words sweetly flowing,
and slurs who flock like flies,
by such words,
and pure indignation,
at what point am I not me,
but rather their imagination?

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sally

Thank you Crystal :)

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A Lonely Journey

Mitsali, 
Who could ever hate you? You seem fantastic. 
Nice write, you are strong, and nice. 

Matthew. 

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sally

Awe you're so sweet!

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sally

Thank you, Greg!
Smiles xx

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The fish of the sea

Wow. I think I have stumbled upon the Golden age of Cosmos by looking at all these comments! This is the most I have seen in ages. And what a fantastic read it was, dont bend for the sake of others, stand strong. Love it. 

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