Poem -
THE IMMACULATE..!
Innocent soul so pure...untouched
Untouched minds absorb so much
Much more information saved
Saved to aid their way...unpaved
Unpaved map of fates unseen
Unseen adventures to keep them keen
Keen and curious is the child
Child of innocence running wild
Wild and free.....Ready and willing
Willing....accepting this land of the living
Living in a world unscathed
Unscathed realms where dreams are made
Made from hearts of solidarity
Solidarity should be our reality
Reality contained and undefiled
Undefiled is the spirit of a child.
Carey Milton ©
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Hi Carey,
Wonderful style and powerful, mentally equip religiously over toned motivators, placed in this poem Carey...Mastery at words here at play, found riddled, throughout this poem, well written and well rhymed, thought laden and very immaculant, is this created poem, by the poetess...The entire poem was one of interest and great detail within it placed...Very Calculatively created...
Jim
Hi Jimmy :)
My utmost gratitude for your deeply expressed response on this piece Jimmy.
Truly appreciated and invaluable feedback my friend..I find great satisfaction in not only the words I deliver on paper but adding a little piece of myself that I hope others enjoy..x
Carey :)
Hi Carey,
Enjoy, that of you,(I find great satisfaction in not only the words I deliver on paper but adding a little piece of myself that I hope others enjoy..x) that we truly do and man, do i have a lot of catching up to do, when it relates to reading writing and commenting on all the wonderful work that have been placed on this site, by yourself, as well as the works, of the many more......Your talents are impeccable in taste and character and is much enjoyed, by us all...
Sincerely,
Jim
This is a beautiful piece sweety and so well written and well thought through. I just love the style you have chosen and the rhyming is wonderful. A very well done poem and I really enjoyed this one. Superb read. Love to you. G xx
Georgina..
Thanks so much for your reading my poetry :)...I appreciate your thoughtful feedback immensely hun!
Im glad this piece got your attention :)..x My love right back at ya x Carey x
LOVED THAT CAREY MY IMMACULATE FRIEND ! BIG 5 FROM ME HON X
Mwah Tracy!...Cheers hun Nice to see ya again x :)
Carey Milton,
Great write on innocent souls. My applause, My vote
The Immaculate Conception is, according to the teaching of the Catholic Church, the unique privilege by which, when the Blessed Virgin Mary was conceived in her mother's womb, she was kept free of original sin through the anticipated merits of Jesus Christ. The Catholic Church considers this teaching about her immaculate conception to be a dogma, and celebrates her immaculate conception itself.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Once again dearest Cherie x
Thanking you for your endlessly encouraging feedback hun.
Where would I be without your love and support...it goes a long way xx