Poem -
In The Twilight
Violet voile shimmers translucent skies
Capture glimmers in deep royal velveteen
Sharp diamonds envelope, awing pale eyes
As burnt amber distills ambiance, unseen
Turing kaleidoscope wingless it flies
Visible truest where darkness feels clean
Earth emerging dewdrops spewing desire
See splendor in hazy heavenly fire
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This is an enchanting nightscape painted with words. The imagery; bathed in the pale blue of twilight: is reminiscent of Walter de la Mare at his best.
Divine!
I love it...and you.
your Jason XxXxXxXx
Thanks Sweetheart,Â
I'm so pleased you liked it. Thank you for the lovely comment
I love you too :D
Your Lorna
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Hi Lorna, short but full of imagery, and fascinating as well.Â
I loved it.
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Leah
Hi Leah, I'm touched by your comment, I really appreciate it
Thank you
Lorna
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truly beautiful and enchanting as well, I'm fixated on this phrase;
'Visible truest where darkness feels clean' Â '...where darkness feels clean' Â simply brilliant, the whole poem is quite good, you're quite the poet, Lorna, I really enjoy reading you, always so impressive, thanks for posting, cheers poet
Hi Christopher, that's my favourite line too, it has two meanings for me one is in the more literal sense of seeing the sky without light pollution the other is seeing self doubt with a clear perspective. I guess it can be interpreted in many ways but this is what I meant by it...Thank you for you comment I really appreciate your kind words
Lorna
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Enjoyable..
thanks for sharingÂ