JEZEBEL
She paints her face like a piece canvass
Crookedly done by an amateur painter
And dresses seductively in her attire
Waiting for the next prey she desires
Her preys are men who lack common sense
Who would do to please her any nonsense
She pulls them with her pinkie
And great men she turns to kinky
Sheβs spiritually devoted to unknown gods
Using her spirituality to lure at odds
She takes the manβs place and lead
Forcing him to bitterness and retreat
She manipulates him to suit her purpose
And she does all these without remorse
Weak is he who happens to be her prey
For the beginning of his trouble is that day
Be careful how you handle her
Non who takes her for granted is spared
Donβt make her hate youβ¦ not at all
Because to early grave you go if she does
Beware of herβ¦She is dangerous!
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brilliant dark ink.
Thank you very much Sweet Poetess
Hey sweet ROSE!!......I REALLY enjoyed this JEZEBEL interpretation........" For the beginning of his trouble is that day.."...... Oh JEZEBEL!! ~ reminds me of the SADE song!!....... ALL STARS!!...... great read!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.........T xo.Β ?β³β΄β
Yay!!!....Thanks for your words boyfriend...I always look forward to your feedback...usually the tap on the back for me...LOVE and ROCKETS!!
So Rose...whenΒ can I meet this friend of yours?! She sounds very...interesting!! ?
A stridently confident work; assured in its conviction and compelling in its delivery.
Excellent!
J x
Like seriously?!!...You'd meet her as soon as you want to go to an early grave...lol...Let me know if you still want to meet her.
Thanks a million...your words means so much to me!
HI Rose, Lovely lovely lines. Cheers!
Yay!!...Always lovely to have you here...Lots of love
Hi Sweet Rose,
The sins of Jezebel have been the demise of many trusting men. Β He that had placed his heart in her hands, has ended up a broken man. Β He that has embraced her lips, has tasted "The Kiss of Death". Β He that has lain with her has suffered "The Fate of The Black Widow". Β Great write Sweet Rose. Β Very thought provoking. Β I love it, and you!
Your Daddio xxx
So sorry for the late response...been off (not delibrate)....You nailed it sweet Daddio!...Thank you very much for your ever insightful words....I'm glad you love it and I love you too
This is a super piece full of wonderful descriptive lines that express succinctly what you are saying to the reader. A great piece with a superb message. Well done sweetie for another very well written and well thought out piece.
I love my little Rosebud
Mummy xx
Thank you very much mum...Learnt a lot from you....I'm thrilled you read it....Your words have made my day!!
I love my mum
Your little Rosebud