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Just Wrong

Just Wrong

Your trickery found me,

Manipulation, spoils thee.

Deception travels miles,

Behind those false smiles.

If alone is what you seeking

The right way you're in keeping.

The loss belongs only to you.

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Tony Taylor

This is WAY cool L. CAIZLEY!!.......you've captured  something VERY special here..... vividly succinct!!.......ALL STARS!!..... high fives!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.  ?βœ³βœ΄β˜€

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Lorna

Thank you Tony, like me short and to the point haha ?

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Jason Brown

With this kind of feeling/piece it would be very easy to start a diatribe and not know when to stop.

It's power lies in the brevity; it's like a poetic punch in the chest with a very tight, very angry fist!!

Excellent!

J xxx

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Jason Brown

With this kind of feeling/piece it would be very easy to start a diatribe and not know when to stop.

It's power lies in the brevity; it's like a poetic punch in the chest with a very tight, very angry fist!!

Excellent!

J xxx

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Lorna

Thank you, it's maybe too vicious, I almost started it with bastard trickery, but decided against it ?

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Jason Brown

Ha! Ordinarily I'd say go with your first instinct; but mature reflection has its advantages.
'Bastard Trickery' could be a good alternative title...or 'Tricky Bastard', maybe?!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ from me, nonetheless!!

J x ?

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Lorna

Oh, yes tricky bastard I do like that?

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Lorna

Thank you Jason, the new title is fitting ?

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Jason Brown

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Fantastic!! Glad you like it. In all honesty...I meant it as a joke; but if it works for you Lorna, I'm not going to argue!!

J xxx

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Lorna

Haha Yes, It works for me, thanks x

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Lorna

 I was sad that I didn't use it, and you have just given me an outlet :)

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Lorna

Ahh, Im a wimp, I changed it back. Thank you though ;) x

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Lorna

Haha, ? I am indeed a wimp. I should stop from giving myself choices as I can't make decisions x

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Jason Brown

The title of this one notwithstanding, you make pretty solid decisions when it comes to poetry...so don't be too hard on yourself, my dear.

J x

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Jason Brown

I've been overly profligate with my PMs; reached the maximum (of 10, if you can believe that!?!): and can't respond for another hour or so.

Send me the thing and I'll get back to you when I can.

J xxx

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Lorna

snap, I'll get back to you in something like 3 hours 30 ish :) x

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Lorna

Thank you Lorris, much appreciated

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tonya turner

Oh wow I am speechless when I read this,gives me chills,great poem:)

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Lorna

Thank you Tonya, glad you liked it ?

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Lorna

Thank you Lisa, much appreciated ?x

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The Bee

He was never fooled by you L :-)

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The Bee

hi Lora, just posted my bit of fun in a limerick inspired by  " Just Wrong".

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