This is WAY cool L. CAIZLEY!!.......you've captured something VERY special here..... vividly succinct!!.......ALL STARS!!..... high fives!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?β³β΄β
Ha! Ordinarily I'd say go with your first instinct; but mature reflection has its advantages.
'Bastard Trickery' could be a good alternative title...or 'Tricky Bastard', maybe?!
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This is WAY cool L. CAIZLEY!!.......you've captured something VERY special here..... vividly succinct!!.......ALL STARS!!..... high fives!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?β³β΄β
Thank you Tony, like me short and to the point haha ?
With this kind of feeling/piece it would be very easy to start a diatribe and not know when to stop.
It's power lies in the brevity; it's like a poetic punch in the chest with a very tight, very angry fist!!
Excellent!
J xxx
With this kind of feeling/piece it would be very easy to start a diatribe and not know when to stop.
It's power lies in the brevity; it's like a poetic punch in the chest with a very tight, very angry fist!!
Excellent!
J xxx
Thank you, it's maybe too vicious, I almost started it with bastard trickery, but decided against it ?
Ha! Ordinarily I'd say go with your first instinct; but mature reflection has its advantages.
'Bastard Trickery' could be a good alternative title...or 'Tricky Bastard', maybe?!
βββββ from me, nonetheless!!
J x ?
Oh, yes tricky bastard I do like that?
Thank you Jason, the new title is fitting ?
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Fantastic!! Glad you like it. In all honesty...I meant it as a joke; but if it works for you Lorna, I'm not going to argue!!
J xxx
Haha Yes, It works for me, thanks x
I was sad that I didn't use it, and you have just given me an outlet :)
Happy to be of service, M'Lady. ?
J x
Ahh, Im a wimp, I changed it back. Thank you though ;) x
Nah...I respect that.
{Wimp!}
J ;)
Haha, ? I am indeed a wimp. I should stop from giving myself choices as I can't make decisions x
The title of this one notwithstanding, you make pretty solid decisions when it comes to poetry...so don't be too hard on yourself, my dear.
J x
Thanks ?
I've been overly profligate with my PMs; reached the maximum (of 10, if you can believe that!?!): and can't respond for another hour or so.
Send me the thing and I'll get back to you when I can.
J xxx
snap, I'll get back to you in something like 3 hours 30 ish :) x
Love it....great write....all smiles
Thank you Lorris, much appreciated
Oh wow I am speechless when I read this,gives me chills,great poem:)
Thank you Tonya, glad you liked it ?
Your very welcome:)
Beautiful ink!
XX Lisa
Thank you Lisa, much appreciated ?x
He was never fooled by you L :-)
:) x
hi Lora, just posted my bit of fun in a limerick inspired by " Just Wrong".
SORRY mean "Lorna"
xx