This is WAY cool L. CAIZLEY!!.......you'veย capturedย something VERY special here..... vividly succinct!!.......ALL STARS!!..... high fives!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.ย ?โณโดโ
Ha! Ordinarily I'd say go with your first instinct; but mature reflection has its advantages.
'Bastardย Trickery' could be a good alternative title...orย 'Tricky Bastard', maybe?!
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This is WAY cool L. CAIZLEY!!.......you'veย capturedย something VERY special here..... vividly succinct!!.......ALL STARS!!..... high fives!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.ย ?โณโดโ
Thank you Tony, like me short and to the point haha ?
With this kind of feeling/piece it would be very easy to start a diatribe and not know when to stop.
It's power lies in the brevity; it's like a poetic punch in the chest with a very tight, very angry fist!!
Excellent!
J xxx
With this kind of feeling/piece it would be very easy to start a diatribe and not know when to stop.
It's power lies in the brevity; it's like a poetic punch in the chest with a very tight, very angry fist!!
Excellent!
J xxx
Thank you, it's maybe too vicious, I almost started it with bastard trickery, but decided against it ?
Ha! Ordinarily I'd say go with your first instinct; but mature reflection has its advantages.
'Bastardย Trickery' could be a good alternative title...orย 'Tricky Bastard', maybe?!
โญโญโญโญโญ from me, nonetheless!!
J x ?
Oh, yes tricky bastard I do like that?
Thank you Jason, the new title is fitting ?
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Fantastic!! Glad you like it. In all honesty...I meant it as a joke; but if it works for you Lorna, I'm not going to argue!!
J xxx
Haha Yes,ย It works for me, thanks x
ย I was sad that I didn't use it, and you have just given meย an outlet :)
Happy to be of service, M'Lady. ?
J x
Ahh, Im a wimp, I changed it back. Thank you though ;) x
Nah...I respect that.
{Wimp!}
J ;)
Haha, ? I am indeed a wimp. I should stop from giving myself choices as I can't make decisions x
The title of this one notwithstanding, you make pretty solid decisions when it comes to poetry...so don't be too hard on yourself, my dear.
J x
Thanks ?
I've been overly profligate with my PMs; reached the maximum (of 10, if you can believe that!?!): and can't respond for another hour or so.
Send me the thing and I'll get back to you when I can.
J xxx
snap, I'll get back to you in something like 3 hours 30 ish :) x
Love it....great write....all smiles
Thank you Lorris, much appreciated
Oh wow I am speechless when I read this,gives me chills,great poem:)
Thank you Tonya, glad you liked it ?
Your very welcome:)
Beautiful ink!
XX Lisa
Thank you Lisa, much appreciated ?x
He was never fooled by you L :-)
:) x
hi Lora, justย posted my bit of fun in a limerick inspired byย " Just Wrong".
SORRY mean "Lorna"
xxย