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Killing Mozart

Killing Mozart

Ā 
When my Raven comes
he often sits on my ledgeĀ 
perched in the middle of my open window
my cypress tree behind him in the background
it's quite a site to see
sandwiched in as he stares at me
sometimes in the mist of morn, as the sun arrives
other times arriving with the blazing sunsetĀ 
after a burning hot day, nature quenching its thirstĀ 
he comes to listen to the music of a very bad violin
playing out of tune, oddly he seems to love it
I keep my window open purely for him
he is my guestĀ 
and as the violin continues to play
and believe me
when I use the word play, incredibly loosely
I imagine my raven to be stone-deaf?
because if he isn't
he is definitely encouraging the death of Mozart
and in that case
I’d know, he has a very dark personality
and simply cannot be trusted
because someone, somewhere
very close by,
Is killing Mozart.

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Rory McGinlay

Sandwiched in , between the Cypress and the Player. Loved it. FYI I play rather badly also, of course pop real can't be compared to Mozart lol

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Shirley Harrison

Oh noooo, lol nobody can play the violin as bad as my neighbour, I use the word (play) very loosely  lol 🤣 

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Jac Tales

My girl friend played the cello when I was young. It was a dream to me. Nice Verse.

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Shirley Harrison

Lucky you if she was in tune, I happen to have a very noisy neighbour 🤣 

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John Loopstra

Love the way you lead us on... Won't work with the fig in our small garden, but then again, The Netherlands did not spend its money on scenery

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Shirley Harrison

True,  but I do love the windmills lol 🤣 thank you dear John. 🌹

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Marion

Last three lines made me smile.... most of us play badly but oh the yearning to learn that musical language!Ā  Your words paint an enjoyable picture Shirley, lovely write X

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Shirley Harrison

She is a terrible violin player, I do hope she reads my work šŸ˜‚ šŸŽ» šŸ™‚ā€ā†•ļø lol

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Marion

I'm a terrible piano player lol... but it's electric so headphones... wouldn't want my neighbours to listen to me either lol X

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