Poem -
Lay Down
Lay down on this ample bosom
Let worries slip away
Far above this robust form
Cotton streams and frays
A crystal tear, in dew drop peck
Lingers lonely on long tip
As flower gem shakes and shivers
Under warm breathy wind
Caressing sunshine ripples curve
Causing bud to flower
Limbs arc high in adulation
While roots curl down in supplication
Fire dances in the core
Expanding to formation
Elevating faunaβs bounty
Exploding into creation
Lay down on this ample bosom
Let your appetite satiate
Cool your burning in her embrace
EncapsulateΒ nirvana
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Rebecca, this is beautiful and seductive. warmest regards PD
Thanks so much Darkly. I'm in a better mood today lol So glad you liked this.Β
Blessings friend.
Seductively sensual write delivered with some succinct and VERY compelling phrasing.......Love the word choices here REBECCA!!.......gives it a kind of staccato flow.......which reads as Uniquely your own........ALL STARS!!.........well done........T xo
Thanks so much Tony. :) I'm really glad you enjoyed this. Love using nature as metaphor. It is one of my signatures I guess. Pleased you stopped by and thank you for the marks.Β
Blessings friend.Β
Hey Rebecca I need a cold shower, whew lol . A wonderful write of passion and sesuality on display on this piece . Very well written . You have gotten me in the mood to crank one of own . Tipping my pen in respect. RockΒ
Hello Rock. So pleased you enjoyed this. I'll admit I was hoping this would work lol. That was the plan. Appreciate your visit, your comment, and your regards. All this kindness from other poets is humbling.Β I'll put you on my follow list so I can see your own inspiration.Β
Blessings, Rebecca
Wise and inspiring, beautifully woven my talented friend xox
Funny... I knew you would like this lol Hugs hon.Β