Let me In ( Sarah )
I love you so much,
I cry to see you weeping alone,
I love you too much,
to stand as a statue, unmoving as stone.
Your spirit has flown,
within darkness has grown,
but love still lives on inside.
Where once light and longing had thrived.
I'm yours, If you want me,
I'm yours if you need me.
I'll be yours forever more,
If you'd let me in.
I can see the pain when you speak to me,
I see the tears rolling down, now free,
I see the dark coiled around your heart.
As love for another tears you apart,
I want to be there,
But what can I do,
when love is for others,
and love's for you two?
I'm just waiting,
so give me a sign,
To say that you love me,
and I'll always be thine.
Oh let me be yours, and yours forever,
standing by your side, and leaving never,
give me the troubles, you hide deep within,
I love you so much,
so just let me in.
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Honestly, of the three, I feel for Sarah the Most. She's the only one who no one really loves.
ok i'll be honest i saw the name and next thing you know i was readingΒ
sometimes we don't know what's good for us (in terms of love)
i'm glad i read itΒ
Sorry Sarah, I wrote it from the perspective of one of the characters in my book, Whose named also happens to be Sarah. I didn't mean to try and call you out like that...
Anyway, Have a nice day and a wonderful weekend!
βΊ no need to apologize it was a lovely pieceΒ
beautifully crafted piece
I'm so jealous lol why is Dmitri so good?Β :D
Brilliant poem,Β enhances Sarah's character,
Awesome work!Β
Sad, sullied Sarah.
I felt for Sarah and her plight. Loving two people, at the same time, is never easy. In actuality, it makes you feel dirty, your soul soiled, somehow.
Eventually you must let them both know how you feel and in doing so, someone's heart is going to get broken.
A poignant poetic proclamation portraying love and loss.
Well penned, Dmitri.
β ~?Dean Kuch?~β
Actually, Sarah Loves someone, who is already pining after another man. She can't express her feelings because she see's how torn Up Natalie is over it. Consider reading Light of HeavenΒ Β andΒ Hells FireΒ to get the full scope of things.
Sarah Loves Natalie.
Natalie loves Matthew,
Madeline Loves Matthew,
Natalie suffers in silence,
Sarah wants to comfort her.
Sad and very eloquent!
Your new fan and follower.
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Thanks! It makes me happy to see so many people appreciative of my work! I do hope I'll see you on some of my other works. : ) It would be great to have you!