Poem -
“Life goes on”
“Life goes on”
(Haiku)
Feelings of un-yield sin,
Perpetually Lost.
Here, existence non-void,
Vowing to all, to live again.
Still seeking to find way home,
In placed, temptations oppose me.
Staged uncrumptive, contemplations,
Destination, well unknown.
There’s one wish I am told,
Although, hope!
There’s a price to pay.
It’s beyond that of all gold.
Jim
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There are no solid questions nor answers within the darkness of sorrowful loss, searching wondrously , lost, moments vague, timeless, seeking shelter for the heart, praying for sorrows upheaval, fighting against the urging of bad or stricken thoughts, merely fighting for the light amits the darkness,
"There’s one wish I am told,
Although, hope!
There’s a price to pay.
It’s beyond that of all gold"
i love those lines, they speak loudly to me, once lost without hope, fighting to find and hold upon hope takes dedication of ones mind, holding values upon retrieval,
much love nardine xx
Hey,Na.,
I really like the way you placed this into perspective for me and you have done it, in the manner in which Williamj would have...I am very impressed with you, dear lady..So true, have you spoken the words of the entire poem....
Thank you,
Jimmy
I agree so much with both of them. A stunningly well written and well thought through piece. Well done J`. Love G xx
Brother Wolf,
Whats up partner and thank you for stopping by and man, just as Nardine, you have splintered the entirety, of this poem, with your accurate dismantling, of this poem, placing in light and on front street, the full definition, of the death of its birth....You amaze me (Big-Wolf), in your poetic abilities as well as your keen eye, for all music, you have given us in your writes, on this site.
Take Care My Friend,
Jim
Thank you immensely Georgina, for the lovely comments and to you, as well as to my friend Wolf and Nardine and to the many more, who are all over this site, if its not through your wonderful contributions of poems, music and stories, you are posting comments, that are very uplifting to the spirits, of the poet are poetess, you are toasting,(for the good)....You folks are well appreciated by us all on this site and to you all we commend...
Sincerely,
Jim
Thank you J`, I just tell the truth and the way I feel when I see such wonderful talent. Love G xx
Georgina,
Your subject matter,(kindness and consideration for all), is one of perfection and we (all), need to practice and put into play a little more, that which you so eloquently preach and deliver, each time you are on the scene, of all posted poems, stories, songs and art.....A talented poetess, in all aspects of life.....
Take Care Dear Lady,
Jimmy
Thank you sweety, that was very kind and uplifting, you have made my day and made me smile. Much love to you honey. G xx
You are welcome dear lady but your earlier comment,(Thank you J`, I just tell the truth and the way I feel, when I see such wonderful talent. Love G xx) with me, rings so very true as well......LOL Jim xx) and you are an amazing talent and inspiration to us all....
Best of wishes,
Jimmy