Like Eric & Shelly

It's raining on my grave
And it's raining in my heart
I've been dead for a whole year
And it's not even the worse part
She is buried next to me
But I woke and she had not
I don't want to live without her!
The only thing I can think about, is her! and the night we were shot!
A crow sits on my tombstone
I think it wants me to follow it
So I get up and re teach myself to walk
Then it leads me to a very familiar piece of shit!
There is a guy in an alley
Sticking up another poor young coupleÂ
The same guy in factÂ
The one who caused me all my trouble
I say lessons never learned old friend!
He turns and says (no!, you're a ghost!
I killed you last year!
At your funeral I gave a toast!?!)
Yet here I am!
He shoots me again
And I laughed in his face as the bullet did nothing
I walked towards himÂ
He pops off another round
I pretend that it workedÂ
And I fall to the ground
He came to see if I was dead
Then searched through my pockets
Then I dug my thumb nails
Deep into his eye sockets!
I told him as he struggled
It's not so bad you killed meÂ
But her why her?
In the middle of his screamsÂ
He said fuck you!.....and her!
I got up and grabbed his gun
Out of a puddle of mud
There was a loud bang
And a sudden thud
The crow took me back
Back to my resting place
But I wasn't readyÂ
I wanted to see her faceÂ
So with my bare handsÂ
I dug till I reached her
And went back to sleep
In her coffin , next to her
By LukeCoomer ©
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Comments
beautiful man. I can imagine the feeling. The Crow is my favorite movie since I first saw it in like 93 or so.
Thanks leandro
i love that movie aswell thanks for taking the time to read it I appreciate you sir glad you enjoyed it
no problem thank you for sharing it and your welcome.
Man Alive, Good read man... This should have received more comments and stars, I give you my 5 stars, and favorite in my selection... Good story from beginning to end, it is not evil, nor is it good, but the character and the write is its own entity, with chance to seek revenge and revisit his love, lying next to him... Very well done man: wolf
tempemendivil
wow .. thank you so very much for the kind words I'm honored to have a poem amongst your favorites and thanks for the stars I need all I can get lol
-LukeCoomer-