Lost Dream
A scarecrow's rebellious last-stand
Pensive sweat, by farmhand.
Windswept conductor blustery toll,
Repossessing straw callousness stole.
Decrepit farmhouse in gilded field,
Broken shutters and paint peeled.
Aimless amid bent parched gold,
Screen-door dins, a respite from cold.
A candle flits behind aged sheers,
Rolling thunder clashes, unshed tears.
Eerie flicks by scaffolding light,
Β Blinking luster guns for a fight
Wispy shadows waltz on a porch,
Avoidant detection by candle scorch.
Frigid wind seeps weathered pane,
Beckons soakΒ of overdue rain.
Cracks and creaks shutterβs mourn,
A tribute to great depression's scorn.
Man of straw remembers a story,
When crops flourished in fields of glory.
Aspirations crash kin harshness outside
Crestfallen like grain farmer's pride.
Remnants in corners of sawdust mind,
Timeworn semblance left behind.
Muted prayer to long-dead saints,
Stitched-lips silence, fruitless complaints.
Pursuant redemption in forgotten field,
Which heaven nor hell will nary yield
Elements claim fragments in aΒ gale,
Yesteryears lament whinging folktale.
To recapture illusions, fleetΒ magic slips,
Rheumatic hands chafed fingertips.
A barn shunned by shameful disrepair,
Delusions of grandeur one cannot bear.
Abandoned buildings crumbled self-esteem,
Adrift betwixt visions of aΒ lost dream.
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Comments
Love it. Very well rhymed
thank you kindly Jamie
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Metaphorical brilliance!
thank you kindly Ian
There are so many poetic devices at play here, Lisa, that it is simply impossible to list them all here.
Assonance, consonance, alliteration and enjambment...just to name a few...
Suffice it to say, this is sheer brilliance.
Pinned it!
β₯?~?Dean?~?β₯
Wow thank you for the stellar comment and the pin
Well deserved; my pleasure!
~Dean?
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Your talent knows no bounds!
Thank you kindly, Simon, your supports is greatly appreciated
Hello Poetess...
Phenomenal as always!
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thank you kindly little sparrow I wrote you something called little sparrowΒ