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Love At first Punch

Love At first Punch

Like no other

you punch me

In more ways than one.....

The utmost

Show of passion

Your beautiful frame no match

for mine....

During the heat of useless

words

You punched me in my stomach

It took my breath  away

in more ways than one

Fearless I thought

This women is the one

Such Passion

It was:

Love At first Punch

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Bradford

Hey mark very true words . When you are in love it does feel like you have been punched but in a good way lol. Great write. Rock 

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Lucas Lazar

Hey Mark…

Love at the first blow is the same as saying love at first sight, but personally I think that in these situations it can be confused with the desire to love, It would not be the first time that a love of the first hit ends turning repulsion or hatred.

There is love to the first hit, that is true, that is true, but as with everything in this life you must be lucky to hit.

A greeting.

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mark thomas

Lucas-The women I am with... She is from Argentina!! She is very passionate ...half my size but she is brave!!! This part is best:but ended up listening to her and laughed!!!

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