Poem -
Love Sonnet No 1
Love, be that what makes a heart spritely dance
To orchestrate a sweet chamber of strings
Where hopeful gaze projects a doting glance
With wishful dreams, that makes the soul have wings
For love can bend and bind two hearts as one
As gentle as a welcome summer breeze
That warms the cockles, and chariots the sun
To guide its rays, which bloom the weariest trees
Love, forever endeavours to be kind
Subliminal in nature where it reigns
It resonates in both heart and mind
Dissolving any doubt that causes pains
Like rain washes away the dirt and grime
So love can cleanse and heal wounds over time
Gwen 30/07/2021
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Comments
Hi Gwen,
Written by a true warrior in the game of love.
Only experience can sculpt these words.
Well expressed!
JP
Thanks JP I was reading a lot of Shakespeare recently and thought I would have a stab at a sonnet. Thanks for leaving your kind words
Gwen :)
Gwen, I can't wait to read your other works here later in the day. this is so well done, so right on, so beautiful, I'm going to spend my waking on it, with my silky foamed latte in hand, on this cool foggy morning. back to read it once again. thanks for sharing this with all of us. John above was very right.
Wow thank you Mark for your wonderful words, and also I loved picturing you with your coffee on a foggy morning. Such a lovely response. Many thanks for joining Cosmo and I look forward to reading more of your work
Gwen :)
Absolute, Sweet, Perfection....from beginning to poems end this stays completely true to its form and to the expectations of the reader....A diamond of a poem that sparkles in the light of day and brightens the spirit in the dark......and in its final line gives a perfect summation of all of its moving parts!!.......PINNED for sweet perfection......your pen is MIGHTY GWEN .....I love watching your evolution as Poet, Painter, and Thinker!!.....Thank you Gwen!!....Lots of Love to you and yours!!
Your ever admirer,
Tony : )
Tony my friend, many thanks for this truly kind and supportive feedback. You are such an inspiration on Cosmo and your words left for others make such a difference to our day. Many thanks for leaving such lovely words here on this poem
Your good friend Gwen :) x
Gwen I believe The Great Bard would tip you the wink if he were to read this.
In a poetry nutshell...Beautiful from beginning to end and your closing line is divine and to die for, the poetic icing on the cake.
I can't say your writing goes from strength to strength for that would be falsity, for it has always been strong no matter what you choose to write about and so graciously share here.
You are the complete poet and poet's poet for when you deliver something new we know it'll be good read.
Thanks Gwen for sharing your poetry gift and not forgetting your artistic one too.x.
Hello Shaun :) your first couple of lines did put a big smile on my face. Imagine that! Shakespeare reading my poem. What a lovely thought. Thank you my friend for your lovely words. As always you are so very attentive and kind. You make a huge difference to Cosmo with your poetry and feedback. Never change my friend, you are such a delight
your friend
Gwen x
Hi Gwen, just a quick one from me (XD sorry I`m on a work break), I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the poetic undertones in this one, especially through the lines;
You always handle your writing with such professionalism in your crafting and unique style. I look forward to catching up more on your work. I hope you are well my friend, sincerely, Max
Hello Max :)
Such a lovely gift to find your comment on my work. You plucked out my favourite lines in this piece too. Thank you for always encouraging me with your lovely support and feedback
It is always a pleasure my friend. I hope work is going easy for you. Stay safe
Your friend
Gwen :)
Hi Gwen, I'm late to the party here and it's all been said above...this is one beautiful write my friend...a truly beautiful piece...you 💥SHINE💥 my friend...hugs 💕💕
Never too late my friend and thank you for taking time to look back at my work. Lots of hugs to you ❤️ x